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Poetry Critical 2.0

Hey guys, Donald here.

In a few weeks, this site will be 9 years old. 9 years! And I still know some of the earliest submissions by heart.

But, boy. That’s like 102 in web-years. So it’s time for something new. I’m building that something now with my nights-and-weekend minutes (and plenty of coffee). Buy me a cup?

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Random Poem:

Youth Group Guy
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You’ve met him—
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You know the one I’m talking about…
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He pulls up a chair and joins you in the cafeteria.
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“Mind if I join ya”, he asks, but if you did mind,
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would he get up and leave?
 5
 
 
“You looked lonely sitting here all by yourself,”
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he offers, making excuses for his forwardness.
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“So, do you have lunch here often?”
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he asks, trying to spark conversation.
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You’re wondering to yourself,
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“Who is this guy & why did he have to sit by me?”
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Out of all the empty seats in the place
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why does this guy next to me…
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What have I done to deserve this?
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This guy, my friends, is a special species of man
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a special breed whom I have come to identify as: “Youth Group Guy”.
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He means well, and is generally FILLED with good conversation.
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Relatively safe, he is rarely scary and seldom repulsive.
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In fact, “Youth Group Guy” is actually very charming.
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You will find yourself sitting up late at nite
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debating all sorts of topics together…
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Just don’t ever make a pass at him—this will be explained later in detail.
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One of the most blatant characteristics of “Youth Group Guy”
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is his inherent ability to make all topics of conversation
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end up pointing toward religion.
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He has honed this skill set to an art.
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In fact, you’d be surprised how you never looked
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at your breakfast toast as human flesh
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broken and sacrificed
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just for you!
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“Youth Group Guy” is not out for romance.
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He doesn’t want to pop your cherry—
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you’ll be lucky if he even wants
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to hold your hand!
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He’s saving the sanctity of lovemaking
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for marriage.
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“Don’t you feel the same way?
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Don’t you want to be pure for your spouse?”
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Before he is finished talking with you
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“Youth Group Guy” will, like as not,
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have added you to his “soul sac”.
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It is starting to get REAL heavy these days.
 42
 
 
He will routinely report back to his guru,
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“Youth Group Leader” guy,
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whom he looks up to in every way;
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charting his witnessing progress in great detail.
 46
 
 
It’s not so much that “Youth Group Guy”
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is a bad man…. In fact, he’s really an upstanding citizen,
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quite the philanthropist and selfless
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to a fault.
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Somehow, it’s just the idea
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that you’re just a number to him,
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part of his latest evangelical challenge—
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yesterday’s good news.
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Sometimes you think it might just be possible to bite on his sweet bait.
 55
You can almost taste the fulfilling worm
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of salvation, goodness, truth,
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faith, hope and love…
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As he walks away
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he casts his line out again.
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You realize that, to him, you are merely a minnow
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in a lake of lost souls…
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He’d probably just throw you back in.
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