poetry critical

online poetry workshop

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Poetry Critical 2.0

Hey guys, Donald here.

In a few weeks, this site will be 9 years old. 9 years! And I still know some of the earliest submissions by heart.

But, boy. That’s like 102 in web-years. So it’s time for something new. I’m building that something now with my nights-and-weekend minutes (and plenty of coffee). Buy me a cup?

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Random Poem:

Spine Rites
unknown

A dilated
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moment—magnetic to night spells: a sanctuary
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of pictures of paintings of rigor  mortis
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in the drains, waters taste of animated
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film and words travel our dimensions, leaving ghosts
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in newborn mucus. Vessels leach out of becoming. Skin.
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Color is turned back to fragile gray, blackened
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by searching our amputated homes, again. Cords
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riven from us, as we scramble for them and squirm
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to breeze or gill—gaping in our means: new
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glass    spectacle.
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On a woke moor, a glamour-blessed woodsman lust the
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scorches of a fairy solace, trips on ghoul valance.
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Din is the uterine vapor fed by a farmed host—
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mortal to their other world.
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This, our maundy body contorts
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milk-giving posset.
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Nourishment mulls wine, split. Wine itself—amniotic.
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A cervix paves out a last nude echo—
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seas the vagina, frothing mimicry dust.
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A time paves.., drinks in all conception.                    The
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tunnel membranes
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