poetry critical

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Random Poem:

I walk a deserted road
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I walk a deserted road
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Unfinished by society
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Left untouched by the menace of humanity
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Only worn out and hidden by the fierceness of the wilderness
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And as i walk i feel its personality
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And the aroma of its dignity
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Difficult to put into words, for none yet exists
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For the explanation can be made into a list
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The grass in the middle dividing the dirt
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The green on the outside defining the path
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The sun in the sky illuminating, journeys of voyagers past
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And that is the all, and I am the last
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Person to see it since the mountain shall bask
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In the glory of the trail, illuminating the vail
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Hiding the true face of that lonely deserted road,
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Following blindly, destination unknown, and information unwanted
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So I shall sail like Magellan, letting fate take control
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And hopefully the end with result in a satisfied goal
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