poetry critical

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Random Poem:

Natasha's Choice
devilsbelboy

She says; "Why don't you act your age
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I'm about to get rid of you"
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I race to the desert and pray, an herbs
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that might  help me see something to do
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Leaving me, she is leaving me
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My heart does a back flip in my voimit
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She says; "I don't got want it takes
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to keep you interested in me
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As I just wipe my eyes in time to see
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that I might have the chance to love"
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Leaving me, is easey for her
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She don't care my heart it was caught
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Baby O Baby,
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You got me goin' in circles
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will you put blood on my head?
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She says; "You are just a lonley boy.
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'an you must suffer me here now".
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As I wipe your childhood hope under
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A carpet of lost memeories
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I care of your days, that you found hazy
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