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Poetry Critical 2.0

Hey guys, Donald here.

In a few weeks, this site will be 9 years old. 9 years! And I still know some of the earliest submissions by heart.

But, boy. That’s like 102 in web-years. So it’s time for something new. I’m building that something now with my nights-and-weekend minutes (and plenty of coffee). Buy me a cup?

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Random Poem:

Joy of omnipotent love elevating stars……
flyinghawk

The day the Universe was created
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out of the laughing womb of everywhere present nothing
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loving mere everything to be yet,
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In the very moment, in that second   the time the Insane Runner
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Escaped out of the boiling pot of permanent eternity
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There You were born together with divine dust
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Building
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Comets & stars
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And I was born to be rider of the stars and the storms.
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Galaxy later We agreed to meet thousand times
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To honour our Mother The Earth  
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The Goddes we saw rising out of Nothing to be the eternal Mother
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Of the rock  & boulder people
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Of The Green Stem People
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Of the breathing people flying, barking, chirping
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  or running naked in the fields
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and swimming in the rivers of lovemaking
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And to honour our father - The Sun
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The God of ever warm light,
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our local source of continuous presence of miracle of life
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which comes from the Father through the Mother
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And You archetypal Eve thinking and loving
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and Me archetypal Adam Loving and thinking
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to be the divine people of the Earth
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were blessed to eat the fruit of the tree of wisdom
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So soon we loved our task many times
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And we suffered for our task many times too
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           And so much
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So often the biting pain was so great we could not recall
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Who we are: Divine people of the Earth. Not at all
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Last time I saw you in your full Shine of divinity was warm summer 1589
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Where the flames of sick human fury of hate towards
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Our mother the Nature of things And the Nature of humble beings healing others
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Sparked the bomb of bloodthirsty witch hunt and we both were burned
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Alive                         yet the bravery & wisdom of you and me
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to welcome the arms of our brother fire
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Turning our young bodies into light fertile ashes
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and realising us to the spirit of Father / Mother….
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I asked you ‘’how we will meet again’’
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And you smiled and said ‘’You will find me, trust me.’’
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Black gazing People at the square did not say a word
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thinking we were friends with their Christian Devil. Ha Ha.
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And as the warm flames of the path opened the door
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In that very second…… before
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The Angel of Death pulled the curtain down for idiots gazing
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I opened my heart and shouted
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With all the love on fire: Let the love will bring you back to me
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And you in the same very last moment
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Opened your very boiling heart and singed: I will love you
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Forever or Longer……
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And than Angel of Death took his black mask off
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And said with the voice of  love: I love you both
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Welcome home
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And took the fragile hands of our souls
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And flow us back to the home of All that is
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And now
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after the surreal mysterious contacts of us two  were made
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I happily wait for you to knock on my door
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Or I will knock on the door of your car or home
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I saw you already on Sunday and I will meet you soon
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I just know I have found you again,
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Because you were searching for me That I am
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And I was searching for you That you are
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I was searching for you in other woman who wasn’t who you are
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you were hunting for me in other men. They were not who I am.
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I felt you today touching my aura and sensing me
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And I will wait for you and I will see you wherever you are even on the Moon
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Full of its light bringing luck back to us soon
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Forget the fear, throw it away, It’s garbage of the deserted past
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Let’s show the world what LOVE IS     And forever let it lasts…
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