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Poetry Critical 2.0
Hey guys, Donald here.
In a few weeks, this site will be 9 years old. 9 years! And I still know some of the earliest submissions by heart.
But, boy. That’s like 102 in web-years. So it’s time for something new. I’m building that something now with my nights-and-weekend minutes (and plenty of coffee). Buy me a cup?
Development updates from Twitter:
|Sunday Morning Basement|
You’re alone on a Sunday morning
with a one-way ticket on an elevator
first floor going down.
The lights are on, and your hands
You curl your fingers around the keys
because there are other ways down.
A few steps later, pipes
the size of mythical snakes
slither from the ground to the ceiling.
To the right: boxes with bright lights beacon
to your left: the rat poison,
marking the closet entrance.
The key in hand, the door opens,
closes behind you. Opens.
Past the vats of yellow liquid labeled
in mysterious letters: GMU-1.
Below them, chartruse stickiness bubbles.
The last landmark, the blue funnel
catching clear liquid off the wall.
At last, the exit sign.
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