poetry critical

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Poetry Critical 2.0

Hey guys, Donald here.

In a few weeks, this site will be 9 years old. 9 years! And I still know some of the earliest submissions by heart.

But, boy. That’s like 102 in web-years. So it’s time for something new. I’m building that something now with my nights-and-weekend minutes (and plenty of coffee). Buy me a cup?

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Random Poem:

PAIN
cormy

Be it physical or mental,
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the result is always the same.
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For everyone and everything,
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has its own full quota of pain.
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The reaction however is different,
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from each person to the next.
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For some it is the enemy,
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to fight from birth to death.
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But there is however the person
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who appears to have no pain!
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But for him it lasts forever without
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a single refrain.
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For him it is not mental,
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nor physical in form.
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For him it is just a burden of a
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soul that has been torn.
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The retrogation of his mind,
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body and his soul.
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Only makes it harder to renovate the whole.
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To see if hope can germinate,
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despite the barren soil.
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The only option open now
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is to work,
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and sweat,
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and toil.
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The burden has not lessened,
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nor changed in shape or form.
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But seen in the dawns new morning light,
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an enemy is born.
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