poetry critical

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Welcome to Poetry Critical, an online poetry workshop. To post your own poetry you'll need to create a user id by typing a name and password in the box above and hitting 'New User'. If you just want to critique or jump into the discussion, however, you can go ahead and get started!

Random Poem:

Alzheimer's
pacman320

My life, my pride
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The anger eats me inside
 2
No thoughts of pain
 3
I have - pushed it all away
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Can't remember what this means
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No recall of what you say
 6
Not a game I want to play
 7
I've learned to forget anyway
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I can't remember
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What it is you did to me
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You've twisted words to make it seem
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Like there is no problem to see
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I can't make this sit with me
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Comfortably
 14
...... Positively
 15
 
 
There are times when I lose routine
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A convenience to your faults
 17
Should you slip, just give it time
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Redemption is just peace of mind-------
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Instead of searching for the you and I
 20
Look inside and ask yourself "why?"
 21
Postulate, be sure you can please
 22
The doer of the deed added fictionally
 23
Now you speak of mutual trust
 24
Your speech received with lack of lust
 25
Soiled innocence through self righteousness
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Now presented to apathy
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