poetry critical

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Poetry Critical 2.0

Hey guys, Donald here.

In a few weeks, this site will be 9 years old. 9 years! And I still know some of the earliest submissions by heart.

But, boy. That’s like 102 in web-years. So it’s time for something new. I’m building that something now with my nights-and-weekend minutes (and plenty of coffee). Buy me a cup?

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Random Poem:

A Christmas Story
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He rubbed his hands together for warmth
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as he sat on a park bench, alone, on a cold December night.
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The park was now empty; for everyone had gone home to their warm houses and families; tonight was the night that Santa would visit.
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The family that he once had was all gone now, wiped away in a car accident years ago;
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ever since then he had lived alone.
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He picked up his back pack and started walking back to his house.  
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His backpack contained all of his belongings; a torn blanket, a water bottle, and a faded photograph of the family he once had.
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His house consisted of a wooden shed across the street from an apartment complex;
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the roof was five feet from the ground.
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He looked across the street at all the Christmas lights decorating the building and thought of all the families inside; enjoying each others' company and enjoying the holiday of happiness, peace, and joy together.
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Then he laid down in the shelter of his shed,
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cuddled up in his blanket so he wouldn't freeze overnight, and dreamt of the Christmas when someone cared about him.
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The next morning, he woke up and made his way down to the street corner where he waited for a generous soul to share a coin or two.
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A tear rolled down his face as he thought of all the people glowing with joy as they received those gives that they just couldn't live without.
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