poetry critical

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Random Poem:

Swan song.
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I knew a girl that I, knowing myself, distrusted. (wrongfully).
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Her name slips past me when talking to others.
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rolls off my tongue unwillingly.
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I look at her pictures and I say "I don't love her"
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and that "I'm glad I'm not with her."
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She being wrong for me
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does not quench my thirst to be with her.
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My friends say that I'm lonely.
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And maybe so.
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We lie under the impression that we are best friends.
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We both know it isn't true, that we won’t let it
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that love did not let us.
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When she is old enough for me
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She would have forgotten all about me it was
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that made her sneak into my room and kiss my lips
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while I pretended to slumber in glee of someone that would fulfill me.
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those skinny legs wrapped their way to a melancholy mind
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and smitten, she listened to me until she had my heart.
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But even so, to this day, (she is)
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the moon the stars the sun
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