poetry critical

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Poetry Critical 2.0

Hey guys, Donald here.

In a few weeks, this site will be 9 years old. 9 years! And I still know some of the earliest submissions by heart.

But, boy. That’s like 102 in web-years. So it’s time for something new. I’m building that something now with my nights-and-weekend minutes (and plenty of coffee). Buy me a cup?

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Random Poem:

The Way To A Mans Heart
winter

I thought he was an angel
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with opalescent pure skin.
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His hair flowed like golden syrup
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over his shoulders;
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from his strawberry lips
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his silken mellifluous voice sluiced,
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drowning anyone he addressed with his dulcet charm.
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His personality was coffee, bitter but addictive.
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He was a spider;
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he would spin and weave his tapestry of words,
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draw you in with a single thread
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and poison you into paralysis.
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Then - he devoured you whole.
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He held me captive.
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But… perfect is a fragile word
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Minor details gave him away:
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his eyes - glacial cyanide.
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A frozen window into his soul.
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It offered winter that chilled to the heart
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if you strayed too close.
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He’d slowly dust you with shimmering frost
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while you stood there
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Entranced
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Fascinated with the glitter of the snowflakes,
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delicate.
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Inside he’d drive hail into your heart,
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dangerous.
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Although it was summer,
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shivers coursed through my body.
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No-one knows I died of hypothermia
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