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Poetry Critical 2.0
Hey guys, Donald here.
In a few weeks, this site will be 9 years old. 9 years! And I still know some of the earliest submissions by heart.
But, boy. That’s like 102 in web-years. So it’s time for something new. I’m building that something now with my nights-and-weekend minutes (and plenty of coffee). Buy me a cup?
Development updates from Twitter:
He leans in, still face
my fragrance spills like dew from a leaf
you are the sweetest of all the others
I gaze at him the way I look at the moon,
and uncurl under shade of a tree
in the quietest moment of afternoon
Days pass, I see him
beyond the leafy pool
Do you see me?
You, seated at a table with a woman,
a woman who makes you laugh
all day together
until evening rain begins,
your suit jacket like an awning in wind
I have no voice to call
My reach, determined, fails
I am just a face
beyond a window full of rain,
falling like stars.
He will come back
Why doesn’t he come back?
Because, it is like that sometimes, my friend whispers
her hair brushing against my cheek
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