poetry critical

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Random Poem:

My beautiful enemy
XxArsonxX

Wrap the wire round the neck, pull it tight to suffocate;
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His mouth is spewing steaming blood.
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Hang the body with a cord, gag his mouth with shards of steel.
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He doesn't know the pain he'll feel.
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Interwoven deadly spikes, tightening cables lacerate.
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Assorted gashes open wide,
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Ruptured veins are gushing blood, scraps of skin are flying off.
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Tear apart the tendons, wire chokes the victim.
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Shred away his features, shred away his being
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Rip the tissue from the body;  rend your flesh.
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Mummified in barbed wire
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Breathing stops, life expires
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Mummified in barbed wire
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Metal binds as you die.
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Tangled in a web of pain, no escape
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Blood seeps through the metal sheath, saw-like noose.
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Tear apart the tendons, wire chokes the victim
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Shred away his features, shred away his being
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Gleaming cords encase the corpse, no escape
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Lacerate, sharp spikes rip
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Mutilation pierces the skin.
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Steel wraps your face, blood soaks the steel
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Bound in wire, soon to die, life choked out, bleed to death.
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