poetry critical

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Poetry Critical 2.0

Hey guys, Donald here.

In a few weeks, this site will be 9 years old. 9 years! And I still know some of the earliest submissions by heart.

But, boy. That’s like 102 in web-years. So it’s time for something new. I’m building that something now with my nights-and-weekend minutes (and plenty of coffee). Buy me a cup?

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Random Poem:

The Necromancer
9

I'm a long way from the days
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of women throwing their underwear at me,
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of riding in the back of limousines jacked-up on blow
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and pills and denial, too shit-faced to find my fight gate number.
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Waking up in strange beds with stranger people
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wearing someone else's clothes, or none at all -
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trying hard to avoid chemical withdrawal, police interest
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and my tormented self.
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For years I neglected my own redemption
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because I knew the price of freedom was death.
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On the way to the forests of Bountiful
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I stop outside the Utah Symphony and Opera,
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press my ear against a wall
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and listen to the muffled sounds of an orchestra
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performing The Creatures of Prometheus.
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The cool Salt Lake air and the sounds of Luwig Van
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more than make up for the barriers that separate us.
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The concert ends, I stub my roach and make my way to the exit.
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I sit on a short stone wall with an empty cup,
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a mini-flashlight between my teeth
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and Dostoyevsky on my lap.
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Being legally insane doesn't deter people from shouting
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'get a fucking job' as they leave the auditorium
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on an perfect summer Saturday night -
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it perpetuates it.
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I pass the Temple Square and the free AIDS clinic,
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pause under the neon marquee of a 24-hour liquor
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and count my winnings.
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My cup is half full.
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Which means about two meals or a pint of cheap vodka.
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The choices of the Steppenwolves.
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I make the trek into the forest,
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lay on my back and drink the fermented potato mash.
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I stare up through contented pines at an avalanche of stars
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and absorb the magnificent sublimity of my own death.
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And I am redeemed.
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