poetry critical

online poetry workshop

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Poetry Critical 2.0

Hey guys, Donald here.

In a few weeks, this site will be 9 years old. 9 years! And I still know some of the earliest submissions by heart.

But, boy. That’s like 102 in web-years. So it’s time for something new. I’m building that something now with my nights-and-weekend minutes (and plenty of coffee). Buy me a cup?

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Random Poem:

After Burn...
InvalidPain

The piercing light,
 1
Dismembered smile,
 2
Cursed eyes.
 3
Yet all the while,
 4
Enchating Me,
 5
With her sweet breath.
 6
I need not see,
 7
That her Heart left.
 8
I Need not worry,
 9
She is my fears.
 10
I need not be scared,
 11
I see her tears.
 12
Yet she is cruel,
 13
This pain Is great.
 14
I feel human,
 15
I feel the Hate.
 16
I feel the torment,
 17
The slashing of her eyes.
 18
I See her lonesome,
 19
I hear her crys.
 20
 
 
I Feel nothing,
 21
Though I once did.
 22
I'm About to explode,
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From all my emotions hid.
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I Am betrayed,
 25
For i gave trust.
 26
I Am destroyed,
 27
Robbed of this gentil lust.
 28
I Am But a fool,
 29
I Pawn in this sickening game.
 30
How can you hurt me so,
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And towards yourself feel no shame.
 32
 
 
Forget our cruel past,
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It means Not a thing.
 34
Not even a knife,
 35
Can match the pain you bring.
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So I am blinded now,
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By this shade of hope i once knew,
 38
Now remind me once again,
 39
Why do I still love You...
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