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Poetry Critical 2.0

Hey guys, Donald here.

In a few weeks, this site will be 9 years old. 9 years! And I still know some of the earliest submissions by heart.

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Random Poem:

First Water, Then Fire
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After so much lost blood,
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in the middle of the flood,
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there sat a warehouse burning
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like an unforgotten yearning.
 4
 
 
The Times-Picayune ran the headline:
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"First water, then fire!"
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And through the ruin I saw the sign
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"I have no quarter," so dire!
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But like those who roam while blind
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we try harder, desperate desire,
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and our tunes never fail, we find:
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Our home, our New Orleans again,
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river mud blended with August rain,
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taste of cafe au lait to ease the pain,
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crawfish éttouffée to feel the same.
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Magnificent city, live oak trees
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make a canopy in City Park,
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or the French Quarter after dark,
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smoothly, a trombonist breathes
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brassy notes into the evening blue,
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or lazy mansions, St Charles Avenue
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a street car rolls, rumbling along,
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its rhythm like an off beat song,
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But then this feeble old city,
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dilapidated shotgun houses,
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cockroaches, poor men's doubts,
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can seem nothing more,
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than an over-hyped shanty town.
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Even then, deep in the core,
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I see glory through the frown.
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First water, then fire.
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It has always burned
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as the Mississippi turned,
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it rages like yellow fever
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and floods of the past,
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this city's rugged leisure,
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so we raise the glass
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to whores and striptease shows,
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and for a bombastic toast
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to Rex, King Mardi Gras
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to shun vexing laws.
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A sizzling second line,
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twirl the parasol in time
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for an involuntary dance,
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or to St Louis Cathedral
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for an ablutionary chance,
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or renewal of a jazz funeral.
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A jazz trumpet blows,
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Dr John's piano rolls,
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one parade comes to a close,
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but we all know,
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as soon as it's gone
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another is ready to roll.
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First water, then fire.
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