poetry critical

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Random Poem:

Blood Loss
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you stabbed me in the back
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and now i'm suffering from blood loss
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you kicked my feet from underneath me
 3
and now i'm on my knees
 4
 
 
you beat me
 5
you hate me
 6
you'll do anything
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to push me down
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i'm forsaken
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yet taken
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and get imprisoned by your
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love
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what can I do to make you leave
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if you left i wouldn't grieve
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i'd thank my god
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that you let me free
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i loved you
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and you abused that love
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i trusted you
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and you stabbed me in the heart
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and now i'm suffering from blood loss
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i need a bandage to cover my heart
 22
put pressure against the wound
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stop the bleeding
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please take a heeding
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to my immeasurable bleeding
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and without a place to go
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i fall back and won't let you know
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i've grown accustomed to your hell
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that i might as well
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be locked in your cell forever
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i'm suffering from blood loss
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everything's gone hazy
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dark and grim and lazy
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everything's shady
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so let me free
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quit stabbing me
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let me go
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and no one will ever know
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