poetry critical

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Random Poem:

Goals of Help
BrokenChild

Here's a child,
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Born into a disfunctional family.
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Being abused physically and emotionally,
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Having a family background,
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They wish they never had.
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So he grows up to be someone,
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Someone different from his family.
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Now he has to maintain this goal,
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This goal not to be his family.
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Not to abuse, drink, smoke,
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Not to be a druggie, murderer, suicidal.
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But they have it too,
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Running through their blood.
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Getting harder each day,
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Trying to keep his goal.
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But this innocent soul is losing,
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Losing his grasp on his main goal,
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His life... friends... himself!
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This innocent soul is broken and torn out!
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Now he has one chance,
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One chance at keeping his remaining pieces.
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One chance to be put back together,
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With a little tweak to change him.
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His one chance is now love,
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One he's holding on to,
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Barely keeping him alive.
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Trying to make this work,
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Trying to live life again.
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After being crushed!
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And now realizing,
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He is pleading for help, silently!
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But it's muffled in pain,
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Pain that no one can see,
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Only to see in his eyes.
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This plead for help.
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                                Roman
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