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Poetry Critical 2.0
Hey guys, Donald here.
In a few weeks, this site will be 9 years old. 9 years! And I still know some of the earliest submissions by heart.
But, boy. That’s like 102 in web-years. So it’s time for something new. I’m building that something now with my nights-and-weekend minutes (and plenty of coffee). Buy me a cup?
Development updates from Twitter:
I am rigid, hard, linear
O, your hair flows like black rivers
I am white, patterns, axis mundi
O, your nails know no reason
I am names, telling, surface
O, you are like not knowing a secret
I am intellect, polis, rex
O, your legs envelop like suburbs
I am trees, reaching, fighting
O, you're like the sky
I am probing, speaking, writing
O, you are what floats in the dark of the bedroom
I am killing the serpent, creating order, connecting with god
O, your curves taste like blood
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