poetry critical

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Random Poem:

Just Adorable (expletive in poem)
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Aw …
 1
look at all the happy kids
 2
enjoying their Big Mac party
 3
don't they look sweet?
 4
 
 
shit...
 5
who said food fight?
 6
no!
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not the chocolate shake …
 8
 
 
Eewwwwwwwwww …
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that was a good shot, Johnny!
 10
look at Emily’s hair
 11
so much for pretty tresses …
 12
 
 
Paula!
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pull those knickers up now!
 14
what's that Michael?
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you think you followed through?
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take him to the toilet mum
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it's running down his leg
 18
 
 
my god, not at the waitress!
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no, I assure you
 20
none of them are mine love
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well, maybe that one
 22
with the straw stuck up her nose
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yes Kassy, I know
 24
it's a snorkel
 25
 
 
I thought you didn’t like ketchup!
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you don't?
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then why
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is it running out of your nose … ?
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Damien!
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that isn’t what doughnuts are used for …
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right ... who threw that jelly?
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do you have to swear?
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they’re only having fun
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sorry
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didn’t realize they stole your apple pie
 36
 
 
oh, yes
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I agree
 38
that will take some washing out …
 39
 
 
ok kids time to go
 40
say bye-bye to the nice ladies who served you
 41
 
 
no, Johnny!!!!!!!!
 42
 
 
I cannot believe you said that
 43
"Fuck off"
 44
is not the same as bye-bye
 45

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