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Poetry Critical 2.0

Hey guys, Donald here.

In a few weeks, this site will be 9 years old. 9 years! And I still know some of the earliest submissions by heart.

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Random Poem:

Note to Complacent Lovers
Callisto

I'm going to say it now. Say all of it.
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Every word I've left on my tounge and choked out  instead
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I'm alright. Or it's fine.
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Those were lies for the most part, by the way.
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So I'm going to say it all now.
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I'm going to say it because its the right thing to do;
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Because I'm not getting any younger
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Because I loved you, once.
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I never said that. Mostly because you never did either. And I felt if I said I love you
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You wouldn't say it back.
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I knew I would not be able to take that.
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So I left my ruby lips
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Sealed like treasures.
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I'm going to say it because I don't want you to waste your time trying to make things work. Like I have.
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Look- you don't come home at night
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This keeps me up. I do not understand this.
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You moved here to live there and now you do and you are never there.
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This is stupid.
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I said I would stick through it but now, I am not sure.
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I am thinking it over.
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I am thinking this was not such a great idea.
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I'm regretting telling you I would.
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Everything has been falling apart since your mother came to visit
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I consider blaming your mother.
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I do blame your mother for a time.
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I forgive her when she leaves.
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Mostly because it was your fault all along. For not talking. Ever.
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Has it been that long that things have been this bad for me?
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Yes. I am sure it is.
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I cannot remember our last date
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That was not you cathartic in your new apartment
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That doesn't count
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Now I remember.
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It doesn't count. It was a month ago.
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So now I am considering going to things alone
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Which I already do, on first thought
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Like the crepe place I was planning on surprising you with today
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Before you flaked, on second thought
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And apologizing tomorrow before you decided you weren't coming home again
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On third thought:
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I am considering that maybe you don't need a girlfriend. And if you do, that it obviously cannot be me.
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Look-
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I wanted to say it's snowing out I know this because I'm out in this cold unforgiving relentless wind
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On our date. Alone. Even though we planned this last week.
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I wasn't going to waste the other ticket at home moping.
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I went to dinner.
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I went to the show
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I went to the crepe place.
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And as   the sugar melted on my tounge
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I got really really angry
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And I wanted to say that I don't wait
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For boys to get their lives together
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To be there for me or
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To make me feel wanted.
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I just wanted to let you know
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Softly. Gently.
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That was a lie.
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Loudly.  Declaratively.
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That real New Yorkers go where the fuck they have to in th snow
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And if you would think
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If you would think, then you would realize that maybe there might be
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even more snow by morning
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Further impeding
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Your half ass bullshit excuses
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For not going out with me or home
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Invalid.  
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I'd like you to know that this isn't going to work out.
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Just putting that out there.
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You made me feel all this while I still had crepe in my mouth.
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I've never been angry eating a crepe.
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I am really angry.
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But I don't wait for half-life posers to get around to being somebody
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I'm sorry. I'm not really, but it's the right thing to say.
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This is now awkward
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I acknowledge this.
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Since I can't find a way to end this, which is ironic
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(Since that's pretty much what I just did)
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Here's a picture of a cat wearing a top hat and dancing.
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