poetry critical

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Poetry Critical 2.0

Hey guys, Donald here.

In a few weeks, this site will be 9 years old. 9 years! And I still know some of the earliest submissions by heart.

But, boy. That’s like 102 in web-years. So it’s time for something new. I’m building that something now with my nights-and-weekend minutes (and plenty of coffee). Buy me a cup?

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Random Poem:

Skinny Limbs and Branches
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My lover and I,
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we climbed,
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we teased, we smiled, we stroked;
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we knew where we were heading
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straight out, where limbs trail off
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to the tiniest thin branches.
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Risky, no scaffolding, no structure to say,
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“This is strong enough to hold.”
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Dangerously, we risked plummeting.
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We let go
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of fear.
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With indiscretion, we kept climbing
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higher and higher, out further and further -
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til our heads were in the blue, so blue
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sheltering sky.
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Lovingly, we soothed hands
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scraped by rough bark, and
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kissed lips and cheeks - both
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ruddy with exuberant freshness.
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Climbing nakedly on skinny limbs,
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eager bodies moving as one,
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motion engendered aliveness
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created by reaching, breathing,
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branching energy of two.
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We did fall, luridly,
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breath by breath,
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into a love too full to speak about,
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amid intertwining lives and limbs.
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