poetry critical

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Poetry Critical 2.0

Hey guys, Donald here.

In a few weeks, this site will be 9 years old. 9 years! And I still know some of the earliest submissions by heart.

But, boy. That’s like 102 in web-years. So it’s time for something new. I’m building that something now with my nights-and-weekend minutes (and plenty of coffee). Buy me a cup?

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Random Poem:

Morbid Reality
Porcelain_Lo

How beautiful a thing, to die.
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And you, my dear, are living a lie.
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Which leads me to believe you deserve no less.
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Oh darling, put away that knife
 4
You know you're not about to take you're life.
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Who do you think you're fooling?
 6
Now wash that mascara from you're face,
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A drama queen who has lost her place.
 8
Faking isn't ignorance, until you believe.
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That blood isn't what you desire
 10
You're lust of death has lost it's fire...
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And you're not fooling anyone.
 12
 
 
Tear that note, it was trash anyways.
 13
Mindless self-indulgence giving yourself praise,
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As if anyone cares if you will "miss" them.
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Now gather the photo's spread on the floor...
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Pile them neatly and open the door.
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Honestly, you're far too much to handle.
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My sweetheart, you've already been scarred,
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No longer do you need to carve.
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You have the marks to prove your mental state.
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No questions would ever be asked
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As to why you felt this was you're task.
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But we both know you're too afraid.
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The twinkle in you're eye has dimmed,
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And life is seeming better lived...
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At least for ten more minutes.
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How silly to put on this show for me.
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I'm not going to be afraid of what I see...
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You're not as believable as you think.
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You crave attention through the flesh,
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By making wounds that keep so fresh,
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But, dearest, we both know the truth.
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So, walk away from that mirror.
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Stop studying the trickling of every tear.
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You're failing miserably at this role.
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The knife cannot save you from reality.
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And you won't give it a chance, it's easy to see.
 38
So why not put it down?
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Oh lovely, you're so cute when you believe your lies...
 40
Don't tell me that you're serious this time.
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I won't believe you till I see it.
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How dramatic this epic scene,
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With life lived through our dreams...
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And if you were going to die, it'd be done by now.
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Who do you think you fooled?
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