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Poetry Critical 2.0
Hey guys, Donald here.
In a few weeks, this site will be 9 years old. 9 years! And I still know some of the earliest submissions by heart.
But, boy. That’s like 102 in web-years. So it’s time for something new. I’m building that something now with my nights-and-weekend minutes (and plenty of coffee). Buy me a cup?
Development updates from Twitter:
|Death of an Addict|
The subtle voice deep in your mind
calling you back to absolution.
The empty game it plays in your head,
seems more like a crucifixion.
No one can save you, the little girl inside
The melody that is memory, envelops your world
Twisted hallways and gothic doors
In a mind no longer recognized,
as your own.
Lonely and scared, huddled in the corner
Dying in a hallway, as sunset glows just out the window
It’s your death mask and looking glass
As you fade away.
As the sun burns out in all its brilliance,
Trumpeting the release of a star encrusted night sky,
You fade away…
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