poetry critical

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Random Poem:

Vertigo of the Bleeding
TPTNW

The way i write its very real
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    it pours out of me like an oil spill
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        the blood runs through me like ink in my vains
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            spilled out on paper by a razor blade
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a cut too deep a scar too soon
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I'll meet you later in the afternoon
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  There's nothing left for me to say
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     you cut it out with your razor blade
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        so now I'll let it bleed away
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           until you come on the next day
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              I'll have fresh ink I'll write some then
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                 my pen explodes, I bleed again.
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a cut too deep a scar too soon
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I'll meet you waiting in the afternoon
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  What i mean is hard to say
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     so I'll just wait for another day
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                           and i'm just waiting
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                            so i'm just waiting
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a cut too deep a scar too soon
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I'll meet you waiting in the afternoon.
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