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Random Poem:

A Trip Through Life
jaimelc

I'm headed on a journey through
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Life's rigid roads
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Where it may lead me
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No one knows
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But as i travel, I'll pass the City of Sorrow and Pain
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In the center of this town
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Is a place called Lonely Lane
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Then i will pass the Poor Palace
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That is slowly sinking in the Sea of Sadness
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What will be next?
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What will i find?
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I see a town called Peaceful Pleasures
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At the borderline
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This town can unlock my hopes
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In the Field of Dreams
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I then can take a dip
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In Success Stream
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Next, I'll take that detour
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Onto Determined Drive
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Take a left on Able Avenue
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And I will strive
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As i keep going
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I see the House on Happy Hill
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Soon I'll reach the School of Lessons Learned
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But there's more to see still
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So I'll just keep going
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And see where it leads
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There are many twists and turns
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Ahead of me
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I will continue down Life's road
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Soon I'll know my destiny
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And if I choose the right path
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I'll have succeeded in Life's journey
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