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Random Poem:

Watch Over Me
ky_diva

I look up at the sky, the clouds, the moon,
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and even wish upon a star.
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Can you see me from Heaven?
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Is that where you are?
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Are you holding my baby boy?
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Has he grown his angel wings?
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Has he given you a smile,
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the one I'll never see?
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Have you taken him fishing
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like you said you were going to do?
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Does he look like me or Logan,
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does he resemble you?
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Are his eyes as black as coal
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just like I wanted them to be?
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Or are they blue just like his daddy's?
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Does he have dimples in his cheeks?
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Have you told him any stories yet?
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Have you held his little hand?
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Have you told him who his mommy is
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and how his daddy is a great man?
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Have you gotten to meet Jesus?
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Does he hold my baby boy?
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Does my angel baby giggle
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while he plays with Heaven's toys?
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Does he know that you're his Pa-paw
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and that I was your little girl?
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Do you know how I much I miss you both?
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Does he know he was my world?
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Does he know his mommy loves him?
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Does he know his daddy does too?
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Please give my angel kisses for me,
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and know I love both of you.
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