poetry critical

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Welcome to Poetry Critical, an online poetry workshop. To post your own poetry you'll need to create a user id by typing a name and password in the box above and hitting 'New User'. If you just want to critique or jump into the discussion, however, you can go ahead and get started!

Random Poem:

It's Persisting Down! (revised)

Kamikaze rain
towards random unsuspecting targets.
‘Shields up’: civilians are protected.
Gathering en-mass,
like-minded forces
join the troops, swelling
trenches are breeched;
gurgled battle cries resound; the invasion
comes in waves.
… and in the distance, the rumbling undertone of war.
Wellington boots
but still they are persisting
down, a rising tide of depression.
What can we do
but sit
and wait out the storm.?

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