poetry critical

online poetry workshop

Current Stats
  • poems: 48,712 (6,231 active)
  • comments: 308,848
  • ratings: 115,126
  • average rating: 7.5
  • forum posts: 224,637
  • users: 10,194 (88 active)
  • current users: 0

Welcome!

Welcome to Poetry Critical, an online poetry workshop. To post your own poetry you'll need to create a user id by typing a name and password in the box above and hitting 'New User'. If you just want to critique or jump into the discussion, however, you can go ahead and get started!

Random Poem:

an ugly moment
Machsee

A clever joke slipped through the filter
 1
between my brain and my tongue,
 2
crashing to the floor
 3
like a drink a drunken hand
 4
carelessly forgot.
 5
 
 
My slick witticisms splattered
 6
all over my feet.
 7
 
 
Before I could shake it off
 8
with charm and change of subject,
 9
I was called out.
 10
 
 
I was on my knees
 11
wiping up the mess with the hem of my dress.
 12
 
 
But the broken glass could not be fixed
 13
and the words would not return
 14
to the errant fold of my brain from which they sprouted.
 15
 
 
All my beauty was grotesque,
 16
my pride turned to shame,
 17
and I became
 18
everything I hate.
 19

(comment on this poem)


0.239s