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- brite and wide -
AlKenny

could you see it in her eyes?
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all the ways and always.
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what would they be?
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- bright and wide -
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lovingly tarnished,
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now swathed in shades of violet-blue.
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trapsing, trolloping, baggy-jean blue.
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dragging her heels
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through the soles of her boots,
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through puddles that once were
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the mirror to the soul - as her eyes reflect
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the puddle. all too well-full.
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and awfully bedraggled,
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my haggard hands handle her;
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to prove some shape -
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the hideous, obnoxious,
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narcissitic date rape.
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08/11/06

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