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Mythic Proportions
grneyeddevil

If I had to choose
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Between you and me living
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And the whole world dying
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I would name you Eve
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I would be adamant
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I would eat that god-damned apple
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Again and again
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Through and through
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I would nibble right to the core of you
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I would plant your seed
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In years to come
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Harvest hope under the sun
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You were the one
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No, you weren't quite ripe yet
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But delicious none the less
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I need a weed to come and strangle
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The legend of you I've grown in my mind
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Hauling the weight of the world in tow
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Mythic proportions I can't let go.
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04/09/08

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