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into the ever blinding
DeformedLion

I understand your lips, the
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way they press
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like darts landing in a swimming
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pool.
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And I think I know what is beneath
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your dress, well pruned panties;
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some floral decor.
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*
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It isn't that fish believe in the
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sea, its that
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I am not sure if I will ever feel
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what knowledge tastes of
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or
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how a body relates to a stone
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as it sinks
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into ever blinding thought.
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05/24/08

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