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Break dancing
almasree

Break and dancing
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to the rhythm of palpitations;
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the beat booms legs into
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shaky jacksons as hyperflated
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thighs wave and ripple
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and cold sweat feels wrong
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as shaky hands tremble
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towards the self imposed
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receding hairline.
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Spinal vertebrae;
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bones and musty yellow
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matter, an extension of
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brain matter over knees,
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thoughts fly by before
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I can remember them,
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Then I hear it again;
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war drums,
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the night getting younger
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every day,
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And so I end up sleeping
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plus 5 and wake up tired ,
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starting life three hours
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too late.
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10/04/08

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