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Twelve hour Rats +
Caducus

Throat slit red
 1
in brake light trance,
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my twelve hour changeling
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appears in wing mirror sunrise
 4
by birds in tarmac trees.
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Traffic light duel
 6
Audi Versus Saab
 7
amber green smog
 8
I scurry then crawl
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to a third exit grave,
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parking by failures
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in Hyundai badges
 12
yellow star cars.
 13
 
Eleven hours crawl
 14
Rats scurry to one room
 15
gnawing at each other
 16
then grouping on one
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to a slow one month death.
 18
Rob is now Robert,
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Rat is now mouse.
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At twenty past nine
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by mute tarmac trees
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my rat sleeps in its Saab tomb
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till it wakes on my forehead
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crawling in to my mouth.
 25

10/05/08

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