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snag (take six)
sggunal

I settled down in a thorny bush,
 1
drawn to its tangled weave.
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There were breathers in its dry lace,
 3
where my skies were framed anew.
 4
 
It prickled to stay, it stung
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to move and it tore to fly away.
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09/07/10

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