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re: i sugggest a challenge  jenakajoffer  7 Feb 10 1:34PM Thread Closed

dearest nutz,

it is easy to miss a comment of yours due to your lengthy posts, and if i've failed to reply to you, this would be why.  i saw that one though ^^.

i'm glad you're still coming around, it's niice to see you're ok.
and what with the cats, well, you have that attractive nature about you.
who can help it.

=-)

re: i sugggest a challenge  R_Reid_Welch  7 Feb 10 1:55PM Thread Closed

> Seq, sometimes you are such a baby.
>
> and one day you will grow up to be a man-baby.
> =-)
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Woookie up again from a nappie.    Fell asleep unaccountably, after my last posting.
I am good about that: boring self to Slumberland.  

JEN: just now reading this page three.
You set the gold standard for pull-christ-i-tudes (you raise little boys to real men).

Help?

r.

(who only put the "u" in "colour" to make our poofter English friends feel as if they were a home, in an all-boys' school, learning Harry Potter style, bitchcraft.

Yep, any USA youth who spells color with a u is surely a me-type (a fag...or a cigarette smoker, depends on whether the "smoker" is in the UK or in any of US.


l.r.

re: i sugggest a challenge  Sequiturist  7 Feb 10 1:59PM Thread Closed

you still being bitter about the 1 I gave your poem...let's see, 2 weeks ago? is hilarious, oh man, you crack me up, reid...

re: i sugggest a challenge  R_Reid_Welch  7 Feb 10 2:01PM Thread Closed

re: i sugggest a challenge  Sequiturist  6 Feb 10 6:51PM
i'm pretty sure that is not a compliment...
okay.

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Listen always to you mother
who, here, would be our Jen.

For she gives advices always
to little boys who ape the hen.

As you age and grow up tall
you'll (by jen!) be no Shirl a'tall!


----------video break, illustrating the
Danger of Mollycoddling boys:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1taC3JjIOkM

re: i sugggest a challenge  Sequiturist  7 Feb 10 2:03PM Thread Closed

yo, speaking of youtube links. did you listen to the song i linked you yesterday? it's in your audio experimental thread.

see, now that was me being nice to you. yet you still hold a grudge against me for a 1 rating of your poem...which I apologized for long time ago. >:-[

I suggest we make fun one of another  R_Reid_Welch  7 Feb 10 2:12PM Thread Closed

See and Pee:


re: i sugggest a challenge  Sequiturist  5 Feb 10 3:01PM [!] Post Reply

i ALWAYS comment if i see an old poem without a single comment.

i hate how some poems hog all the comments.

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Real men capitalize I,
or would you rather grow up to be a hog?

A Pig is an animal with dirt in its mouth...

(am one)

Here, kind young man: a wonderful song of the past,
good for all of us of all areas of this pen:

---> http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cy-wWUNtwy8

re: i sugggest a challenge  jenakajoffer  7 Feb 10 2:16PM Thread Closed

jesus reid, how old do you think i am? lol.
oh wait, you're right, i could actually be Seq's mother.  he's what, 17?  well, i wouldn't be awfully young, but it's possible.

hehe, laughing my ass off at this, Reid:

> Listen always to you mother
> who, here, would be our Jen.
>
> For she gives advices always
> to little boys who ape the hen.
>
> As you age and grow up tall
> you'll (by jen!) be no Shirl a'tall!
>

re: i sugggest a challenge  jenakajoffer  7 Feb 10 2:19PM Thread Closed

i mean WOULD'VE BEEN AWFULLY YOUNG.  

damn. =-)

so look out Seq,
madolyn's your other motha,
Rask or web's your father.  
reid's yer gramps.
isabelle's your grannie and Starr's yer uncle.  (too bad 'bob's not here anymore)
hahaha, i'm so funnie.

what a colourful family!

re: i sugggest a challenge  R_Reid_Welch  7 Feb 10 2:22PM Thread Closed

C&P again:

re: i sugggest a challenge  Sequiturist  7 Feb 10 2:03PM

yo, speaking of youtube links. did you listen to the song i linked you yesterday? it's in your audio experimental thread.

see, now that was me being nice to you. yet you still hold a grudge against me for a 1 rating of your poem...which I apologized for long time ago. >:-[
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You are a very kind fellow to have given that poem a ten as a cookie gift.
You show good character that I would do well to emulate.
You will never be snob now, as I sometimes am, in dealing with your former self.

I hold no grudge against you at all.  I like you.
I hold no grudge against you at all.  I like to hold word-guns against heads,
instead!

Will try to make a poetry reading using the computer and its mike...microphone,
not the Bauer device.  

THANK YOU for the link to the song. I have been too selfish and "busy" being a PITA,
and was making that theremin docu-mess. I shall now listen to the song you linked.
It had better be good.  If I don't like it: I, Fox, slather and sling you inter that-thar
potato patch, which, we allus knows: offers no haven for bunny boys.

smiles, I heart you.   Possibly with this:
http://img256.imageshack.us/img256/9244/screenshot214lk3.jpg

(just kidding: roll with the punches, always? then you never feel a knock
but you might just get a blow


Job)

re: i sugggest a challenge  R_Reid_Welch  7 Feb 10 2:28PM Thread Closed

CP CP CP CQD and SOS:

re: i sugggest a challenge  jenakajoffer  7 Feb 10 2:16PM [!] Post Reply

jesus reid, how old do you think i am? lol.
oh wait, you're right, i could actually be Seq's mother.  he's what, 17?  well, i wouldn't be awfully young, but it's possible.
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Entirely possible! Mother William
You are young, and fathered a child
When you were less than fourteen

And by the Law of Southern US life:
That makes you a mother of ten.

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