poetry critical

online poetry workshop

Thread

Return To Index1-10 of 63
What happened to the swing set?  unknown  31 Dec 10 5:08PM Thread Closed

i hope it's not broken

re: What happened to the swing set?  pebble  31 Dec 10 5:09PM Thread Closed

i'm just here

sat on wood

re: What happened to the swing set?  jharrison  31 Dec 10 5:12PM Thread Closed

cue 1970's pron muzak.



I have come to fix your plumbing.. darlin' ..

re: What happened to the swing set?  unknown  31 Dec 10 5:13PM Thread Closed

> i'm just here
>
> sat on wood

need a push?
go on, re-post it

re: What happened to the swing set?  pebble  31 Dec 10 5:14PM Thread Closed

ok
kneel

taps sprung a leak

re: What happened to the swing set?  mandolyn  31 Dec 10 5:17PM Thread Closed

he remains beneath it-- gasping for air.

re: What happened to the swing set?  unknown  31 Dec 10 5:18PM Thread Closed

> ok
> kneel
>
> taps sprung a leak

i understand
too much pressure

re: What happened to the swing set?  jharrison  31 Dec 10 5:18PM Thread Closed

> he remains beneath it-- gasping for air.


He is a she.

re: What happened to the swing set?  mandolyn  31 Dec 10 5:20PM Thread Closed

i beg to differ.
he is a he... surrounded by sand and old dog poo


> > he remains beneath it-- gasping for air.
>
>
> He is a she.

re: What happened to the swing set?  unknown  31 Dec 10 5:21PM Thread Closed

> cue 1970's pron muzak.
>
>
>
> I have come to fix your plumbing.. darlin' ..

o danny boy, the pipes are calling..

Return To Index
1 2 3 4 5 6 7 | Next


0.972s