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re: sticks and stones  unknown  6 Apr 13 3:12PM Thread Closed

> Lies stripped of its interest and futures life for to share


Crap.

re: sticks and stones  unknown  6 Apr 13 3:13PM Thread Closed

> To leave in memories purpose a progress to declare


Awful.

re: sticks and stones  unknown  6 Apr 13 3:13PM Thread Closed

> How fraught was its first journey to those bells of infare.


Fucking awful.

re: sticks and stones  unknown  6 Apr 13 3:14PM Thread Closed

> analysis of Mor’s metric poetry.


See above.

re: sticks and stones  plath  6 Apr 13 3:15PM Thread Closed

We are here standing by and are now caught up with this thread's vast speed.  Mor, please drop the next bomb so that we may eliminate your precautious bollocks.  :)

re: sticks and stones  unknown  6 Apr 13 3:48PM Thread Closed

> Ah well, just one more of Mor’s varied styles laid open to comment.


Stop posting poetry in the forum, Mor.

If you want critique of your writing post it in the proper place.

re: sticks and stones  plath  6 Apr 13 3:50PM Thread Closed

Since this particular thread involves the same bollocks throughout, we shall just say good night for now.  :)

re: sticks and stones  unknown  6 Apr 13 3:54PM Thread Closed

> Since this particular thread involves the same bollocks throughout, we
> shall just say good night for now.  :)

Now thanks to plath we are back to shit again, she just loves to fuck this site up.
We let her, she wants war she has got it.
and just for those who missed it.

Now that plath has arrived, we no doubt will have to revert to the mindlessness that prevails on PC.
I wish she would stop calling me Mor, it’s quite embarrassing..
I could talk about interesting things like Isabelle’s grandchildren or dead crows, but instead I chose poetry, how terribly boring for all concerned

However, I like this last stanza; I think that the dactyl endings make all the difference.
“Singlings” how I too, remember the singlings.
Ah well, just one more of Mor’s varied styles laid open to comment.
“So back through past haughs where pain’s life has etched me;
retrace, my singlings, from life’s lone aspen tree.
For as I glance back, with a sad tear to my eye
I see aventurins, in leaves whispered- good-bye.”

re: sticks and stones  plath  7 Apr 13 10:18AM Thread Closed

If you don't like this site, the moderators, the authors, then LEAVE.  Rather simple solution to your ongoing problem.  Either that, or continue to practise your typing speed when we delight in suspending your incessantly rude posts.  We have the power to do so you know.  It is our pleasure to accomodate you in this manner.  :)

re: sticks and stones  plath  7 Apr 13 11:47AM Thread Closed

If you don't like this site, the moderators, the authors, then LEAVE.  Rather simple solution to your ongoing problem.  :)


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