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re: a gift for larry lark  unknown  29 Aug 16 5:12PM Thread Closed

The idiot Mor is back again.
What evil thought besets him.
To frame what’s known as shit-sniffer Mor
With pictures of his tiny wiener.



~ corrected the name and the childish grammar and spelling errors ~

re: a gift for larry lark  unknown  30 Aug 16 12:31AM Thread Closed

How sad it is that we should see.
The sight of jenn’s depravity.
Those sorry words she endless scroll.
From empty head and heartless soul.

re: a gift for larry lark  unknown  30 Aug 16 3:52AM Thread Closed

Mor is less
his little part
contracts further
when he farts

re: a gift for larry lark  unknown  30 Aug 16 4:02AM Thread Closed

Jenn writes in silly, senseless prose.
One wonders where the wisdom goes.
No doubt she thinks she’s very smart.
That wastrel in our world of art.

re: a gift for larry lark  unknown  30 Aug 16 7:28AM Thread Closed

How sad it is that we should see.
The sight of Mor’s depravity.
Those sorry words he does endless scroll.
From Mor's empty head and heartless soul.

Mor is less
his little part
contracts further
when he farts

Mor writes in silly, senseless prose.
One wonders where the wisdom goes.
No doubt Mor thinks he’s very smart.
That wastrel in our world of art.

re: a gift for larry lark  unknown  30 Aug 16 9:47AM Thread Closed

Jenn copies this, she copies that.
She’s nothing but a copy cat.
For it is true, she’ll never be.
Not ever once, as good as me.

HEY  aforbing  30 Aug 16 11:15AM Thread Closed

Y'all need 2 play nice!  >>Otherwise, the Rolex guy will come and SPAM all of your poetry... No, really--the fear is REAL! ~forbs

re: HEY  unknown  30 Aug 16 11:23AM Thread Closed

How sad it is that we should see.
The sight of Mor’s depravity.
Those sorry words he does endless scroll.
From Mor's empty head and heartless soul.

Mor is less
his little part
contracts further
when he farts

Mor writes in silly, senseless prose.
One wonders where the wisdom goes.
No doubt Mor thinks he’s very smart.
That wastrel in our world of art.

Mor copies this, he copies that.
Mor is nothing but a copy cat.
For it is true, he’ll never be.
Not ever once, as good as me.

re: HEY  unknown  30 Aug 16 12:36PM Thread Closed

> Y'all need 2 play nice!  >>Otherwise, the Rolex guy will come and
> SPAM all of your poetry... No, really--the fear is REAL! ~forbs


He would have a job to find any poetry on this site.

re: HEY  unknown  30 Aug 16 1:00PM Thread Closed

> Y'all need 2 play nice!  >>Otherwise, the Rolex guy will come and
> SPAM all of your poetry... No, really--the fear is REAL! ~forbs


He would have a job to find any poetry from Mor because Mor can't write poetry.

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