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re: HEY  unknown  30 Aug 16 1:01PM Thread Closed

Mor copies this, he copies that.
Mor is nothing but a copy cat.
For it is true, he’ll never be.
Not ever once, as good as me.

re: HEY  unknown  30 Aug 16 1:01PM Thread Closed

What lies, what tales she seeks to tell.
That tinker from the depths of hell.
Her black heart burns with furies hate.
What monster now, seeks it to mate.

re: HEY  unknown  31 Aug 16 2:51AM Thread Closed

The Lark and Cad are well entwined
some say two of the same kind
i find their disputes very silly
it must be both have shrunken willies.

re: HEY  unknown  31 Aug 16 4:13AM Thread Closed

That jenn and starr they’re so entwined
Their willies are so hard to find.
They really don’t know what  to do.
When they get caught up in the poo.

re: HEY  unknown  31 Aug 16 6:22AM Thread Closed

Mor copies this, he copies that.
Mor is nothing but a copy cat.
For it is true, he’ll never be.
Not ever once, as good as me.

What lies, what tales Mor seeks to tell.
That tinker from the depths of hell.
His black heart burns with Furies' hate.
What monster now, seeks it to mate.

The Mor and Shaw are well entwined
some say two of the same kind
I find their disguise very silly
it must be both have shrunken willies.

That Mor and Shaw they’re so entwined
Their willies are so hard to find.
They really don’t know what to do.
Except they do love sniffing poo.





~ corrected the childish grammar and possessive errors ~

re: HEY  unknown  31 Aug 16 8:13AM Thread Closed

She copied all her Sappho.
Yet claimed it was her own.
She thought she’d set the world aglow.
What shit, her tinker throne.

re: HEY  unknown  31 Aug 16 8:38AM Thread Closed

Mor is jealous of Jenn's Sappho.
He could not match her skill to own.
Mor thought he’d set the world aglow.
What shit, that pissy pants Mor.

re: HEY  unknown  31 Aug 16 12:07PM Thread Closed

Everyone can see why jenn plagiarises the work of others, she has not got a clue how to write poetry. She just copies others, then pretends that it is her own.

re: HEY  unknown  31 Aug 16 1:20PM Thread Closed

Everyone can see why Mor plagiarises the work of others, he hasn't got a clue how to write poetry. Mor just copies others, then pretends that it is his own work.
Poor little pissy pants Mor.

re: HEY  unknown  31 Aug 16 2:38PM Thread Closed

Which merely goes to show how mad she really is, ranting on about someone who has not been here for years. What a cuckoo!

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