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re: HEY  unknown  31 Aug 16 3:43PM Thread Closed

Which merely goes to show how mad Mor really is, obsessing about Jenn who has not been here for the past year and more.
Every chance Mor gets he mentions Jenn's name.
What a fucking cuckoo!

re: HEY  unknown  31 Aug 16 3:44PM Thread Closed

Mor copies this, he copies that.
Mor is nothing but a copy cat.
For it is true, he’ll never be.
Not ever once, as good as me.

What lies, what tales Mor seeks to tell.
That tinker from the depths of hell.
His black heart burns with Furies' hate.
What monster now, seeks it to mate.

The Mor and Shaw are well entwined
some say two of the same kind
I find their disguise very silly
it must be both have shrunken willies.

That Mor and Shaw they’re so entwined
Their willies are so hard to find.
They really don’t know what to do.
Except they do love sniffing poo.

Mor is jealous of Jenn's Sappho.
He could not match her skill to own.
Mor thought he’d set the world aglow.
What shit, that pissy pants Mor.

re: HEY  unknown  31 Aug 16 11:41PM Thread Closed

What lies, what tales she seeks to tell.
That tinker from the depths of hell.
Her black heart burns with furies hate.
What monster now, seeks it to mate.

re: HEY  unknown  1 Sep 16 12:44AM Thread Closed

> What lies, what tales she seeks to tell.
>  That tinker from the depths of hell.
>  Her black heart burns with furies hate.
>  What monster now, seeks it to mate.

With scrawny tit and creaking bone.
Her toothless gums of sin propone.
To screech  with all her animus.
Vile excretions from her stinking tush.

re: HEY  unknown  1 Sep 16 5:47AM Thread Closed

With scrawny dick and creaking bone.
Mor's toothless gums of sin propone.
To screech with all his animus.
Vile excretions from Mor's stinking tush.

re: HEY  unknown  1 Sep 16 6:11AM Thread Closed

Mor copies this, he copies that.
Mor is nothing but a copy cat.
For it is true, he’ll never be.
Not ever once, as good as me.

What lies, what tales Mor seeks to tell.
That tinker from the depths of hell.
His black heart burns with Furies' hate.
What monster now, seeks it to mate.

The Mor and Shaw are well entwined
some say two of the same kind
I find their disguise very silly
it must be both have shrunken willies.

That Mor and Shaw they’re so entwined
Their willies are so hard to find.
They really don’t know what to do.
Except they do love sniffing poo.

Mor is jealous of Jenn's Sappho.
He could not match her skill to own.
Mor thought he’d set the world aglow.
What shit, that pissy pants Mor.

With scrawny dick and creaking bone.
Mor's toothless gums of sin propone.
To screech with all his animus.
Vile excretions from Mor's stinking tush.

re: HEY  unknown  1 Sep 16 6:43AM Thread Closed

O what vile thoughts those words obscene
such rhetoric from the tinker queen.
That would her vitriol apply.
A thousand words and each a lie.

re: HEY  unknown  1 Sep 16 7:36AM Thread Closed

O what vile thoughts those words obscene
such rhetoric from the Idiot Supreme
That would Mor's vitriol apply.
A thousand words and each a lie.

re: HEY  unknown  1 Sep 16 7:36AM Thread Closed

Mor copies this, he copies that.
Mor is nothing but a copy cat.
For it is true, he’ll never be.
Not ever once, as good as me.

What lies, what tales Mor seeks to tell.
That tinker from the depths of hell.
His black heart burns with Furies' hate.
What monster now, seeks it to mate.

The Mor and Shaw are well entwined
some say two of the same kind
I find their disguise very silly
it must be both have shrunken willies.

That Mor and Shaw they’re so entwined
Their willies are so hard to find.
They really don’t know what to do.
Except they do love sniffing poo.

Mor is jealous of Jenn's Sappho.
He could not match her skill to own.
Mor thought he’d set the world aglow.
What shit, that pissy pants Mor.

With scrawny dick and creaking bone.
Mor's toothless gums of sin propone.
To screech with all his animus.
Vile excretions from Mor's stinking tush.

O what vile thoughts those words obscene
such rhetoric from the Idiot Supreme
That would Mor's vitriol apply.
A thousand words and each a lie.

re: HEY  unknown  1 Sep 16 10:44AM Thread Closed

It’s  no wonder jenn’s Sappho poetry is shit.

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