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re: update site  unknown  9 Sep 16 5:20AM Thread Closed

Mor is a hypocrite and an abusive moron.


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re: update site  unknown  9 Sep 16 9:57AM Thread Closed

Mor’s a self centred little prick, always looking for attention.




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re: update site  starr  9 Sep 16 12:25PM Thread Closed

Mor needs to run into someone who's high on bath salts so they can eat his ugly face, spit it out and feed it to the hawks.  SPLATT!  

re: update site  unknown  12 Sep 16 4:26AM Thread Closed

How sad to see the silly starr
illumed in his allusion.
The flightless wings of his alar
so, stymied by inclusion.

re: update site  unknown  12 Sep 16 7:19AM Thread Closed

How sad to see the silly Mor
illumed in his allusion.
The flightless wings of his error
so, stymied by inclusion.

re: update site  unknown  12 Sep 16 8:01AM Thread Closed

> How sad to see the silly Mor
> illumed in his allusion.
> The flightless wings of his error
> so, stymied by inclusion.

No wonder jenn's Sappho poetry was so bad.

re: update site  Inuki  12 Sep 16 9:34AM Thread Closed

> Mor needs to run into someone who's high on bath salts so they can
> eat his ugly face, spit it out and feed it to the hawks.  SPLATT!  

I thought investigators found no connection to bath salts in the Miami cannibal attack.

re: update site  unknown  12 Sep 16 11:07AM Thread Closed

No wonder all of Mor's poetry is so bad.

re: update site  unknown  12 Sep 16 3:17PM Thread Closed

> > How sad to see the silly Mor
> > illumed in his allusion.
> > The flightless wings of his error
> > so, stymied by inclusion.
>
> No wonder jenn's Sappho poetry was so bad.

jenn's Sappho poetry is shit.

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