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re: semantics and clueless cunts named Trolly Polly  unknown  10 Jan 17 9:09AM Thread Closed

Another thread Trolly Polly opens her arsehole and shits all over.

This is Polly's Narcissistic Personality Disorder at work.
She really does think it's all about her.

Mix this with her Compulsive Disorder need to share details of her life and then turn into a passive-aggressive crybaby when other trolls come to troll the troll, it is plain to see that Trolly Polly is not fit to turn on a computer let alone be allowed near one.

The word cunt as a descriptive of Trolly Polly is a bit of an understatement, but if the hat fits.

What a cunt.

re: semantics and clueless cunts named Trolly Polly  PollyReg  10 Jan 17 12:00PM Thread Closed

Of course my writing is about me...Don't know what you're getting at? Don't care to know either?

re: semantics and clueless cunts named Trolly Polly  PollyReg  10 Jan 17 12:05PM Thread Closed

Oh I see, it was you that posted the abuse "poem", anonymously, were rude when you received critique, told me I'm trying to be queen of comments or websites or some other such rubbish....and then deleted it when I was rude in return?

Ahhh. Mindsets of the small and righteous.

re: semantics and clueless cunts named Trolly Polly  PollyReg  10 Jan 17 12:26PM Thread Closed

That I open my asshole is beautifically descriptive though.

I take a virtual shit like a porn star, me....Gotta count for some sort of recognition.

re: semantics and clueless cunts named Trolly Polly  PollyReg  10 Jan 17 12:28PM Thread Closed

When I grow up I want a condominium for my birthday.

re: semantics and clueless cunts named Trolly Polly  unknown  10 Jan 17 12:32PM Thread Closed

Just like you Polly, Just like you

re: semantics and clueless cunts named Trolly Polly  PollyReg  10 Jan 17 12:33PM Thread Closed

Take it to the poetry is making thread, unknown. Revisit your roots! That's a good start.

re: semantics and clueless cunts named Trolly Polly  unknown  10 Jan 17 12:43PM Thread Closed

So wrong again, Miss Polly no poems -- the unk called you 'queen of the last word'.
And you turned rude one when he made you look silly.
Even Mike in his pomp would never get so emotional about tenses.
Maybe you should take a vacation before your health deteriorates much more.
Why, the very idea of an unk disagreeing with a crit you so graciously provided -- whatever next.

back to the concept  cadmium  10 Jan 17 12:51PM Thread Closed

my need from you is a critique where you honestly and openly talk about why you're writing poetry and where your poetry comes from. who are your influences -- that is, where did you learn that something was worth imitating, worth writing at all? and, who helps you write -- how many voices do you have in your mind space, how many consciousness and abilities to create?

i don't know what the unks want from you, but they seem to not know what to ask.

> Of course my writing is about me...Don't know what you're getting
> at? Don't care to know either?

re: semantics and clueless cunts named Trolly Polly  PollyReg  10 Jan 17 12:52PM Thread Closed

Yes well given I'm sort of a quiet person that can only make sense in terms of this website...Are you explaining what was said as if I didn't remember replying to it...hoping I was drunk or something so I didn't mean it? I meant it. It is just the defeat of the website when people become abusive, rude and disrespectful to others because they haven't had their work fellated. If you have a point make it by all means otherwise shush. A holiday from what? Oh for heavens sakes... Yes thanks I have two planned for later this year. Want a pillow to hug?

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