No plagarism, the same poet did them both. Read the fine print on Shadowpoetry, why don't you before you yell foul! — unknown
there's another recent example of concrete poetry on this site, but i'll be damned if i can remeber the title. it's not seen too much, is it? i know it was popular during the late 1960 and early 1970s. — Catbox
I believe it was Shelby that once told me that this person (shadow poet) is one and the same. Big deal. I mean, does Aforbing help teach us any better whether they are male or female? I could give a shit. I like HIS/HER poems no matter what. The way some of you are talking on the message board, I get to wondering about you. — unknown
I'm with you, unknown. It does NOT matter at all. The comments and poetry would still be the same and they are good. That's all that matters. — unknown
WOW!!! I like it you put feelings in it you had a lot of true meaning when you wrote this poem and wanted ppl to know how you felt GREAT job I liked it ALOT — unknown
dis is hot!!! da way da person wrote it — unknown
I like this poem because it's creative and unique. — unknown
dis is hot!!! da way da person wrote it makes me understand it
also i really liked the way it was wriTten!!
GOOD JOB HOMIE! ;~)
BY DA PERSONA CREW — unknown
Like that you wrote it the shapeof a body — unknown
The poem itself and the form of it is very creative. The poem is about the body and how everyone always judge by how you look because that's the first thing they see. The poet made the poem in the form of a body as well, which I think is really cool. My favorite line was the first line, "My body is a walking representation the outward visual caption of what it means to be me." — unknown
I like this poem, mostly because the shape shows the description of a body , which is described in the poem. I also like the line when it says that her body is a walking representation the outward visual caption of what it means then they split up the shape of the body. this is just great ! — unknown
It looks as if she has a body like an hour glass. Big breast, small waist and perfect hips, thighs like a dinosaur. — unknown
This was a great poem and the structure of it was also great and very creative. — unknown
it looks like homer simpson with a spear in his head, to me.
woah. that's really cool. (; good jorb. — ducktape
thanxs u did my homework for me :) — unknown
Change one's ways and one changes one's shape. Keep one's ways and one maintains what one is. Which is more challenging and right? I think this is true but there are so many people in civilized places- seems we never quite get the time to get to know how to read the signs consciously. I read that a native tracker can tell whether one has all sorts of characteristics based on one's tracks but they start from birth and get an ease into it. This is redundant, particularly in "what you see is..." and not too poetic but it starts a wonderful conversation, and minus the row of periods, I respect the effort to create your shape. Your shape is thin on words and needs to share more of your own spontaneous thoughts and originalities, but also true and honest. No disrespect intended. :) (C) — unknown
To improve presentation of the image can't you just put 1 dot at the begining of line 1, then add spaces? - Nice.
Hobby — unknown
No... unfortunately this program doesn't allow me to do it like that, I wish it did. In Microsoft Word this puppy looks perfect, but this format is a bit limiting. — aforbing
A random pop up. Truly. I love it. You don't need the "will" in your last line. — borntodance
you suck! — unknown
sounds like nicolecote is here, commenting just above me.
her or one of her many twin twats.
-interesting poem. short on content but very appealing nonetheless.
Looking at how it impresses the young guys -that it is a female figure-, this is funny.
To my eyes it's a posing, strong male. To each his own. Never better demonstrated than here, right?
Oh yeah I "suck" too. I get that on my poems too lately. Some site. Sorry about that. — netskyIam
Isn't there a balloon concrete poem on this site? I thought GalvanicGirl did it, but it's not on her profile. — unknown
Oh, Aforbing, here you are - without the bling scarf, I see! hahaha — Isabelle5
Dis shit is soooooo fuckin hot as hot as a mother fucker — unknown
Dis shit is real hot — unknown
You should have made boobs. BIG BOOBS!! — unknown
i dont get this poem? — unknown
ITS OK — unknown
IT IS THE MOST CUTEST THING I HAVE EVER SEEN IN MY LIFE<33333 — unknown