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Drumbeat
morphie

I want to beat to your rhythm.
 1
Cardiac syncopation.
 2
Inside it. Around.
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I want to dance to the tone
 4
of your drum.
 5
 
 
I want to know the
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fire of synapses
 7
eclipsing electrical
 8
leaps.
 9
 
 
I want to swim in your
 10
logic, knowledge is
 11
nothing but the smell
 12
burning between your
 13
lips.
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I want to pierce your
 15
skin and raize your
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very bones to play
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your rhythms right.
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29 Nov 04


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dude i play the drums...
anyway i liked this 1.
it really made me think
good job
 — unknown

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