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Red Wall Plastic

turns on the fan
to block out the
static hum
dead energy
it floats in this space

9 Jan 05

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this kind of creates a mental image. A guy smoking a ciggerete in a room dimmly lit with an overhead lamp, maybe talking to someone he wouldnt ussally be, but due to the unusual circumstances he has too. I like this.
 — InMyBlood

short short short--thats good;; the imagery is good too
 — modioperandi