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what is a beehive?
gnormal

what is a beehive?
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8 oclock: hundred strangers
 2
walk into a room.
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from my dinner with andre.  i want one.

30 Jan 05

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strangers? 100?
 — unknown

what is LU?
Sorry but I've never heard of that.
Please respond soon so I may (if possible) help you out here.
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 — ducktape

What a buzz

Larry sting my pants Lark
 — larrylark

This is good.
 — unknown

I love this!
 — unknown

Had to read a couple of times to sort it out but really good.
 — Isabelle5

beautiful as usual gnorm.
 — unknown

a 'room' for the straight nosed.
 — unknown

nice and concise, i love it.
 — opal

I like this a whole lot.  Creative. New. Well done.
 — WordsAndMe

never fails
gnormal
never fails
gnormal
 — unknown

never does
: )
 — fractalcore

I totally don't get the significance, if there is one, of 8 o'clock (as opposed to any other time), or Andre, or a hundred.  But am dying to know more.  Love this for its simple complexity, or its complex simplicity, or its simple simplicity or ... or something.  Really genuine.  9.
 — VeroniCat

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