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(FOTO FRIDAY 15) By the hill at the bottom of the house
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I wanna kiss you, Daisy
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wanna kiss you so hard
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but paw says I gotta wear
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a rubber till am thirty-one.
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I wanna lick you, Daisy
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wanna lick you so hard
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but paw ain't budgin'
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on the subject of this rubber.
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I wanna suck you, Daisy
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wanna suck you so hard
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but maw says paw's a fuckwit
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an' there's no arguing with fuckwits.
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I wanna scream, Daisy
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wanna scream like crazy, Daisy
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wanna cream ice cream you
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in dreams I devour you
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But for now, let's just screw
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lets just screw it again, Daisy.
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Doggy style, Daisy.
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see pic at  --->     http://tinyurl.com/2vol9m

13 May 05

Rated 10 (7.3) by 2 users.
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AHHHHHH! OH MY SHIT LET ME LOG IN SO I CAN RATE THIS A 10!
 — unknown

TEN TEN TEN TEN TEN TEN!


You know what makes me love it? the repitition of 'daisy'. you did that well.
 — OKcomputer

Oh, and the rubber, oh!
 — OKcomputer

i wish i knew who you were unknown, you are the secret foto friday poster. i love you. i will call you chobby for now on, ok?
 — onklcrispy

OKc, your splendid ten deserves ten, thank you very much and onky, chobby's ok or Mr Chobby but never chobbychops, chobbykins or chobbly wobbly.  Glad you liked.  ;)
 — unknown

woof
 — unknown

Heh! I wonder how long a doggie would last at PFFA?!
 — unknown

I LOVE THIS!! it's excellent. Your repitition is so much fun. Your feelings are so sincere , i loved it.
 — Gabriella

maw and paw. huh.
you make me laugh.
 — kaleidazcope

Heh! Like something oot o' the Broons!
 — unknown

i couldnt hate this more than i do right now.
 — unknown

I guess you were just feeling a bit over tired. ;)
 — unknown

yes orgasm.
 — OKcomputer

this is a bit rude is it not?
 — Meep

fantastic.
 — Virgil

I thought this was really dumb.
Like just completely stupid.
And then I looked at the picture,
and you made me soil my pants in glee.
[the ten.]
 — EpicPants

yeah, this is cool.
: )
 — fractalcore

I like the bluesy feel of this poem.  Good alliteration, repetition and certainly, humor.  Reminds me of that song, "The Crawdad Hole."  
 — unknown

I wanna kiss you all
wanna kiss you so hard

:)
 — unknown

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