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Amongst The Butterflies 2
kazfernandes

A moth once joined the butterflies
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It took them all quite by surprise
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But they saw truth deep in his eyes
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And together roamed the skies.
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"I know that I don't look the same"
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"But they respect me, know my name."
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And as time passed, his wings went light
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No longer black as dead of night
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And then one day, they turned pure white
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Indeed an awesome sight.
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In with the butterflies he blended
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His mind was pure, his soul was mended.
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5:46 pm, 7th March 2005

17 Jul 05

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yay!
 — lonelygirl

i love this one it is so happy. im glad things worked out for the moth.

how did you think of  the idea for this?
 — Lia

Cute.
 — junky

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