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Bedtime Beats
Maxximmuss

Come on and let me have you
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Sleep on in my arms with your head on my chest
 2
Legs around my body
 3
So we can contribute to the dreams in the head
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Share sweat and the beats
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The hammer of 2 hearts
 6
Which pulsate over the dark sky
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For the sounds so profound
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That they create the tension
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Over you and me
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So we can be
 11
Filled with the same harmony
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27 Sep 05


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This is ok, there just isn't much to it.  You rhyme sometimes, but don't have a specific way of doing it.  You're rythym is kind of off.  Personally, I wouldn't capitalize ever line.   I like the emotion behind this.
 — fallinforyou

it's a bit wee.
 — Kauf
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