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gnormal

3-letter word poem, just for fun.

ONE
 1
MAN
 2
HAD
 3
HER
 4
 
 
THE
 5
GUY
 6
WAS
 7
MAN
 8
ONE
 9
 
 
SHE
 10
WAS
 11
ONE
 12
TWO
 13
 
 
BUT
 14
WHO
 15
WAS
 16
SHE,
 17
 
 
THE
 18
NEW
 19
ONE
 20
WHO
 21
HAD
 22
HIS
 23
OWN
 24
RIB
 25
 
 
AND
 26
BOY
 27
WAS
 28
SHE
 29
HOT
 30
TOO
 31
 
 
SHE
 32
WAS
 33
NOT
 34
BAD
 35
 
 
WAS
 36
SHE
 37
 
 
FOR
 38
ONE
 39
DAY
 40
SHE
 41
HAD
 42
HIM
 43
EAT
 44
FOR
 45
HER
 46
AND
 47
SIN
 48
 
 
AND
 49
THE
 50
MAN
 51
DID
 52
'ERR
 53
 
 
HIS
 54
ERR
 55
WAS
 56
FOR
 57
ALL
 58
MEN
 59
 
 
YOU
 60
TOO
 61
ARE
 62
HIS
 63
ERR
 64
 
 
FOR
 65
EVE
 66
AND
 67
EVE.
 68
ALL
 69
MEN
 70

14 Jun 03

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Comments:

cute. creative.
 — thinknerd

very cute :)
 — Ananke

This is incredible -- the only thing I'd like to see you ditch is the apostrophe in the first 'err' -- why?
 — unknown

I figure that apostrophe is a pun. And the other "err" is a pun as well (one which is used in a King's Quest title as well). This is gnormal, after all. And I like puns.
 — semaj

um........well your certainly no Eminem or 2Pac for that matter but you tried..YEY!!!
 — unknown

I get the second pun, what was the first about? and how does the parentheses get that out? and who has been posting these (see above) inane comments?

quite shiny job, gnormal. a scathing bite and I love the pun at the end. TINY TALE is better, but only because it is better by its very nature; that is not to say this poem has any shortcomings, for it doesn't. I just like TINY TALE.
 — unknown

what parenthesis?
the single apostrophe is used in place of a letter.
in this case, H.
is that what kings quest did? the only kings quest ive ever seen was running on my little brother's tandy 1000 "PC compatible" 8086. did he do her? who?
 — unknown

ok....
 — unknown

The second 'err' pun to which I was referring was the err on l64 (used in the title of KQIII, specifically).

I must admit that I find old computer games rather enticing to continue playing these days. Oh, the puns and jokes in such! It's quite entertaining.
-semaj
 — unknown

like the idea and all behind this, but the caps and singular words give me a goddamn headache, scrolling down to read this.
 — wendz

impressed. very creative
 — lonelygirl

stoner.but still mad
 — bobmarlie9

W
E
L
L

F
U
K

M
E

J
E
S
U
S

!
!
!
 — unknown

err requires no apostrophe, and do you mean "heir" the second time you use it?
 — saysayonara

the apostrophe is there for a reason (h).
yes i mean "heir", as well as "err".
you only read it once?
 — gnormal

this thingamadooooooodle
is nifty...
'specially
L65-70...that's great, BUT


















needs a monkey
 — chuckles

now that's cool. 10/10
 — IamDave

gr8
.exe
cue
sh'n

: )
 — fractalcore

umm, make that


DON-CHA-TUT

gr8
.exe
cue
sh'n


: )
*2/27/08*        
 — fractalcore

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