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Kissing Fish
Riverwriter2

The world felt slumberous and numb
 1
The reckless leaves all tossed about
 2
Dark winter days with restless sleep
 3
I hung my head as if in doubt
 4
No promise would life keep
 5
 
 
But then the wind blew fast and cleared
 6
the clouds away, the sky felt near
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and instantly my mind awoke
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I saw your face, my heart it spoke
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Of all our moments I hold dear
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Of days in spring we fell in love
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The great sun and the full new moon
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Anticipation stirred your voice
 13
We couldn’t meet too soon
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of how we’d go to any lengths
 15
to just touch hands,
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or cheeks, or lips
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so connected, so intense
 18
like kissing fish
 19
like kissing fish
 20
 
 
And now that light has shone again
 21
Upon the leaves, upon my brain
 22
My heart grows orange, full and wide
 23
It stirs the deep beneath the tide
 24
Into my soul fresh waters rush  
 25
Bright burning colored dreams for us
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And flutters with loves simple wish
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like flaming tails
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Of kissing fish
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12 Nov 05


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That, Thats a good!!!
 — RicoBravo

Haha! Thank you RicoBravo. Anyone else??
 — Riverwriter2

This must have been put up ata bad time. Any comments fellow poets??
Riverwriter
 — unknown

I really like this.  i like this a lot.
 — likeavirus

Thank you likeavirus! Anyone else??
 — Riverwriter2

ha o i love this


i can sing this in my sleep backwards
 — funes

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