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grandchildren playing
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A dreamscape unfolds before you eyes
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that wills your heart to quicken
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and sends your mind to a region far
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where thoughts have no completion
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but simply are
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and to feel eternity in your soul
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and know that you will see it
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with conscious mind,and soul so bare
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because it was written
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in times before,by a man of truth
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a man who had the wisdom
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i love them all, Jesus said
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and so do i, the children
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1 Dec 05

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Being a grandfather I can appreciate this. Funny that my grandson is visiting this weekend, 5 years-old and a holy terror at times. He's such a handful that sometimes it stops being fun. Most of the time it is though! But this poem went beyond that to help me look at how he carries "me" on and my son, all three of us holy terrors at times! Beautiful job!
 — wamblicante
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