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Wonderful Things
topop

mount Figi
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is a wondeful word...
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"Figi"
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hah.
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snow can fly
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if its wings are lifted by the wind
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or it can float along from your window...
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how wonderful it would be to float along the air.
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and snow can melt in your mouth,
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but what's more?
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something so delicious,
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like a sugar cookie,
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can too.
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and a painting is worth a 1000 words,
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but when a painting is that beautiful
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its speechless.
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and things like
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people
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                and
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love
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are wonderful too.
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9 Dec 05


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good imagination keep working on this
 — unknown

what should i change?
 — topop

wow
can't believe i missed this...
nice poem
 — unknown

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