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katt

Luv, Love, LOVE
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(heart <3 Heart)
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Letters meant nothing
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at the start.
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But man made them
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so we could say
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how we felt
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in every way.
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But the letters
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El,
 10
Oh,
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Vee,
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And
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Ee
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mean nothing
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to me.
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Screw them up
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and spell something new.
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“I VOLE you! Don’t you vole me?”
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This is why we need poetry.
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13 Jan 06

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I agree.

And I quite vole this poem.
 — GalvanicGirl

I vole this poem! But I *OVEL* it even more!

Ha! Watcha gonna do now? See? 'cause I sorta took your vole, and then I took your screwy-upy line in the poem and made my own non-love love.

Because... because that's why you said we need poetry.

Even though this isn't poetry. It's just me commenting on *your* poem. Which is nice, by the way.

Yeah.

It's very nice.
 — GalvanicGirl

L10 personally, i would say "Ell", but it doesn't really matter, i guess.
L19 "... Do you vole me?" maybe. seems too demanding as it is now. like, clingy, annoying.

i don't understand your use of capitals in this poem either, and i'm starting to think i won't in the next one of yours i read.
 — inutile

Well, to be quite honest, many times my use of capitals could be categorized as a constant battle with Microsoft word.
 — katt

I think i like clingy.. like someone who is desparately trying to communicate their emotions and failing.
 — katt

Its real quaint to see a tiny furry creature like a vole creep into a poem
 — larrylark

aw, cute.
 — unknown

voles and moles are adorable. 'Tis truly true
 — borntodance

Creative!  A great, light take on it.
 — boothben

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