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Light show

To the light, the people go.
Masquerading for a show.
Turn the light out, watch them go.
Back to people they don't know.
Clifford Kenneth Arkell

18 Jan 06

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i love this. it reminds me of going to a play where you know all the characters better than your own life. line 5 is a fantastic ending.
 — HandsomeHerb

is L5 actually part ofthe poem?
it confused me, i want to know what it means.
it's simple and the repetition works for me. it's pretty.
 — ileviyou

i usually dont like poems that rhyme, but this was good; short and sweet.
 — gears

Are you being serious. If not then there's not a laugh in it
 — larrylark