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echo poem
gnormal

it simply repeats.
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29 Jan 06

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funny.
 — unknown

this is one i can apriciate. nice work guy.
 — TheO1dCrow

this can be more playful:

Poem
Poem
Poem
Poem
Poem
 — unknown

TheO1dCrow, I strongly doubt you take honours courses. The word is "appreciate."

-an honours student.
 — unknown

forever + ever?
 — unknown

he's not going for playful.
 — unknown

Deer Powet

i don't weewy get wis

but i wuv it anyway

woger
 — unknown

Genius.

catch 22. nice.

as i try to figure out mechanical or inspirational
(Lenore?)

i realize.

echo poem.
 — unknown

ha!
nice one gnorm.
 — unknown

brilliant
 — marieF

The use of repeats reminds me of something on a loop, rather than a physical echo. Maybe I just don't get it?
 — unknown

LOL!
 — unknown

Thanks.

Meep
 — unknown

i like it

signed John Jacob Jinglehymer Smith
 — unknown

clever
 — steveroggenb

Johnny-daker has Donald Tetto's dick in his ass.
 — unknown

...and i repeat...
: )
 — fractalcore

Can't argue with the sentiment expressed

Larry Lark Larry Lark Larry lark

PS Made me smile
 — larrylark

you spin me right round baby right round like a record baby round round round
you spin me right round baby right round like a record baby round round round
you spin me right round baby right round like a record baby round round round
you spin me right round baby right round like a record baby round round round
you spin me right round baby right round like a record baby round round round
you spin me right round baby right round like a record baby round round round...and so on...
 — DeformedLion

Cute. Here's mine:

This is
Not a
Poem.
It is
Only
A test.
 — lepry

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