8 Feb 06
Rated 6.5 (7.9) by 2 users.
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odd. quite odd. I like it.
ditto both previous comments, and add "nice"
odd but cute.
obviously a case of gert
This is poop.
Change the title to "oddly." Enough is redundant.
is how it shall beeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.
i love your poem
I'm not so sure if I understand this poem, but I like it.
a riddle indeed.
wonderful, already feel lighter
open minds sounds so academic to me in line 10 but it works. lol
who is this? Unveil thyself.
Wouldn't that be cool? If dragonflies breathed fireflies?
i love whoever wrote this. i want to stalk him/her.
please, tell us your name so we can worship you forever.
I admit it.
I'm the one who wrote it.
No! I did!!!!
It was meeeee!!!!!!
yes, well. i can only worship one person at a time, you know, otherwise it gets too confusing.
isn't it usually the other way around?
I mean, don't you have tons of unknown minions?
i used to, but they have all gone
*spreads hands, indicating their emptiness*
i loved my minions and stalkers and whatnot, they are sorely missed
Wow, I like this a lot. Thanks. (10)
definitely an unusual sort of ... poem.
i guess i can see how dragonflies might inspire a wee thing like this.
its like a fortune cookie when you ve been ripped off at the local xhan wu wu restaurant
No. Dragon Flies Don't Breathe Fire Flies.
thought provoking as well, in a childish sort of way.
very nice poem.
are you the creepy kid that asks people if they would pay him to eat bugs?
Odd and cutesy, while still maintaining some depth. Sevenworthy.
i keep changing my rating. it is so hard to decide what this is worth.
i am in love with the author, and still waiting for them to tell me who they are.
sad, aren't i?
A belated discovery. I miss the lake. I miss the flaslights of 1,000,000 fireflies.
That's a ten for you mr(s) mystery
i've never seen fireflies. but i love them anyway. just like i love this unknown author.
hah, i think i might be starting to creep the author out. how lovely. i'll stop now, if i must.
Never stop, dearest Inutile, for it is I, the author.
You know, I still don't feel like a genius.
Yay! A random pome I've read before.
I tole you Dragonflies breathe fireflies.
tis odd, but not good. sounds nice but is empty.