|Your index finger just
5 Aug 03
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My index finger just what? Pushed the period key three times? Fell off? I don't know. This poem is obviously one not meant to be read aloud, but to be looked at much like a concrete poems are. I suppose it makes me think, but it's too vague to me. It is original however. ~Chris King 10/10
Would the person who "wrote" this give some explanation, please? I just don't get it.
that's probably the point
What good is poetry is no one can understand it? We might as well all go and figure out the new Da Vinci puzzle! (which I did - has anyone else tried it?)
after you rate it, the rest of the poem becomes available. all you folks who've said something above, have available to you, something you didn't before commenting.
the name? your finger just blue? just blew? I still... don't... get it...
look at what? i don't get this, like everyone else here......whats the point
d'oh. that was me.
and I get it now. very clever.
what did you get????
er, the first unknown above me, not the second, how did that other one sneak in there... blah.
HA HA HA HA. And you all criticize Moth and Waxwing's poems...now here is a poem that has outdone their's, there's not even a joke here to be read. I give this a one.
I didn't feel a thing.
I'm a bit confused and curious, and all of a sudden I got it.
(I cheated, though. Bad me.)
That's an amusing little thing.
I think it was a very novel idea. Clever. I don't think however it would equate to much outside this poetry workshop, only because that little username wouldn't pop-up after being read. Original idea however.
can anyone explain, please?
okay i still don't get it.
These types of 'poems' generate the most responses. Now what does that tell you about this site?
when you must respond in order to see the poem,
that says nothing about the merit of the site or of other pieces posted.
ok, im sorry, i hate vague statements.
comment on this poem. anyone.
then after you comment, click on the username and you see the rest.
blah. im sick of this.
installation poetry! hehe.
lol, gnormal is the cristos of poetry critical
What's this ? minimalist poetry AND optical effects? WOW!
what will i see, i wonder?
Alright, I love it. Installation poetry indeed! Talk about working with the form.
OK I'll bite.....
OH JEEPERS!! clever you...
I rated it and I find no added comment. GIVE IT UP!
Eheh. Nice idea.
Wow. That's wonderful. I love it.
I like it, but I think it needs to be shorter.
a ten for thinking outside of the box.
What is a poem?
you can mope, or
you can poem.
me, i poem
(sometimes with tea
in which case i pemo.)
clicked the mouse button.
i got caught cheating my life is now over and i am to blame
You've got me
such a nair-
word as well.
I think I just got it. I am so incredibly lame. I think I'll get a Cat scan to find out if there is brain matter in my skull!
what will i see?
A poem as performance art! gnorm, this is you at your finest. However, this isn't a poem. My index finger just...
This is the suckiest thing that ever sucked (and i saw the whole thing)
ah lets see this thing!
My middle finger just
I get it its a great poem
Gutter Boi was here "class of 08"
Only Gnormal. Still love your stuff though.
I totally know what that index finger was doing. ;) that happened to me tonight. lol.
... more like ???
i just dont get it =/
Lol nicely done. I dont think many catch on what u are supposed to do.
I think this poem is trying to be profound and unconventional.
But it fails in that it isn't a poem. It isn't anything.
It is superficial and conventional.
me no get it
Okay this is good and all, but why the hell is this still getting comments and my poems arent?
okay, rated it one at first, but on second thoughts..its brilliant. here's a ten to even out the one. first one ever. less is more, huh?
Very clever gnormal. I am impressed. Having two accounts for a purpose other than to post more than two poems a week! Whatever will you think of next?!
Gnormal, I really respect your confidence. :) Even with all of these people criticizing you, you continue to justify the meaning of your poem.
Ha Ha superb.
oh good grief - I like the space around the words best.
Well, I'm confused..
I don't get it. But maybe I will now...
i gracefully join the masses (okay, not so gracefully)
all I'm gonna say is..............
AND WHAT THE HECK IS IT, ANYWAY?!?!?!?!?!!??!?!
This is shit. Gnormal can write poetry to save his fucking soul...
i really like this one.
lmfao just reading the comments cracked me up... I personally don't get it, maybe that's cause it's 2 in the morning and I need coffee? Anyway, it should get a 10 for just being so entertaining...
three dots...I think you may have something...wait nah...I prefer other punctuation...???!!!::::
My middle finger just
flicked you off
well...my index finger just...
i think it's pretentious and lame.
I think it was stupid.
My middle finger just
dot dot dot
Your index finger just blue (blew) ... [me away].
Can anyone explain this?
Ok, so my index finger just blew?! What is the significance oif the three dots? I mean if my index finger just blewed then it would just be a bit messy?
I am typing this before reading other comments, which i am goin to do and feel really stupid for not getting whatever there is there to get, but oh well.
I think its hilarious, b/c its not a poem, but it is. but it was more hilarious when i thought the index finger was the middle finger,(or is it, im still not sure, but isnt it ur pointer finger? hmm...). or you could look at it as something sumone said, like: your index finger just... and fill in the blank, such as your index finger just... went up my ass, or flew out the window, or pointed at the naked lady runnin down the street. :) it leaves it all so open!
following the directions
Sorry, but I'm having more fun reading the comments than the poem.
Your index finger just blue [blew] ... ... ... right through me.
HOW TO WORK THIS.
CLICK "blue" using your mouth and index finger
I get it!
i like the dots
hmmm....i dont really get it.......
It's hard to believe so many of us leave comments so lengthy for something like this.
I like it... I think.
I feel cheapened!
This is just what I need at 10 am - thank you. As others have said: Clever! I get it and love it. Wd make a great title to a book of poetry because it would be exceptionally graphic.
As for it not being a "poem," that's hooey. I've read books of poetry where the poet makes use of signs, symbols, and format and isn't half as meaningful.
This is my favorite poem of the day.
big it up for da little dots y'all!
terrible waste of time. the problem with creativity is its flexibility which can be a strength or weakness. and in this case it was a weakness.
My curiosity has gotten the better of me Mr. Jinks......-BR-
nice....original...how'd you get 2 accounts? great job..i was kept interested -BR-
Anyone got a magnifying glass ,i thought i saw a speck of a word
My index finger just.. um sits there?
i hate stupidity, this is stupid.
I can't decide if this is brilliance or jackass-ity. probably jackassity. for the 'unknown' with the simpsons line, i like what u wrote more than this 'poem'. sorry, but this may just be the first poem i say something like this about: "tell me your kidding....or at least drunk"
Can My Pinky? -----> ***
i want to take back my previous comments and say this is great.
scrolled down...down...down and ..down.. and down and down, hit a bunch of keys, scolled again, right clicked and there's your poem
I don't know why you wanted me to read this.
any poem by gnormal is worth a look. the trick is to understand what you've just seen.
10-faved at long last.
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