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Reading of this poem at http://media.putfile.com/Walls92

Living without walls
Lets the pain seep in
Crushes with despair
That leaks from society
Shields are kept down
Then bad luck abounds
Tripping on emotion
With angst all around
Outside there's beauty
In living out in the open
Earth will bring the joy
That floats from her heart
Sensitive touches
Put tremors in flesh
The gifts of ecstasy
Will make skin tingle
Is balance worth the price
To living open and free
Or is it worth the security
Of hiding behind walls

10 Feb 06

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