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Edible Man
Kauf

tumbled
 1
like luxurious
 2
lovers in secret
 3
mouthfuls,
 4
the seraphic scent
 5
of old sheets slithers
 6
under the crumpled
 7
polyester
 8
in satin curves,
 9
a rangy, rumpled pelt
 10
spun golden
 11
hips dancing.
 12

15 Mar 06

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I like the "ing".
 — Meep

Why, Meep? Is this a Kauf poem?
 — unknown

why not?
 — Meep

I like this poem.
I like the title too.
 — Krttika

Very tasty!
 — unknown

I wear the same shoes
as everyone
I got the same blues
as everyone
So try and call me,
I'm immobile man
 — unknown

yes I am.
 — unknown

Thanks, yes it is.
 — Kauf

Enjoyed a great deal.
 — WordsAndMe

I'm jealous that you enjoyed it.
 — Kauf

thanks.
 — Kauf

i like lines 1-4 the most
 — nicolecote

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