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parallel universe (when you talk you sing)
gnormal

all you say is song
 1
as every plant is tea
 2
in hunger all that moves is food
 3
and every meal free
 4
 
 
everything is made from
 5
letters of dark green
 6
hold our world together
 7
each sentence is a seam
 8
 
 
a seeping twist of dna
 9
i snort into my eye
 10
reality a pitchspork
 11
my brain
 12
a little pie
 13
 
 
gods poke it all from nothing
 14
cough a billion seeds
 15
shouts and pouts
 16
from sprouts and snouts
 17
i love this hill of beans
 18
 
 
im afraid to finish this
 19
a poem too big for me
 20
a little boy has held his breath
 21
since he was seventeen
 22
 
 
and his kiss can swirl
 23
the lines on a leaf
 24
can read the sines on the green
 25
so perfectly his mention makes
 26
the awkward
 27
                  cut
 28
                  to the sex scene
 29
 
 
a bird in my hand
 30
fledgling
 31
molting
 32
panic
 33
stare
 34
heartbeak
 35
flutter
 36
feathered
 37
hair
 38
 
 
teething im envoured
 39
bubbles sizzle and im gland
 40
im melting
 41
a girl in a car
 42
is melting
 43
the jam in the jar
 44
 
 
so slick your cat tongue
 45
up my nose
 46
nuzzle my salty chin
 47
feel me bite right off your lip
 48
each sibilant you let slip
 49
 
 
ravish you with fingerpens
 50
i write you on your skin
 51
i spell across your paper back
 52
a name for every grin
 53
 
 
stole your worlds from under your breath
 54
threw them right over my need
 55
and you just smile up at me
 56
holy sweet bred tart of greed
 57
 
 
i spunk the brightest lines from you
 58
questions so read with life
 59
to smell the air they burned across
 60
cuts nothings
 61
like a knife
 62
 
 
sights and sounds are questions
 63
shrieking like a star
 64
who knows who and who
 65
who knows what we are
 66
 
 
any words that wallow in
 67
my whole throat i swallow
 68
so what
 69
is this about
 70
wait i have to get this in so
 71
i can get it out
 72
 
 
  the joosy diamonds i
 73
savory syllables spiral
 74
  slurp from your lips
 75
up from your pink basque tongue
 76
  ive buzzyeyed smeared them
 77
hngry 4 yr lttl vwls
 78
  all over your hips
 79
i sckd out evry1
 80
 
 
our teeth touched
 81
     when you stole my air
 82
          my pen
 83
and so we sit
 84
     still dumb and stare
 85
          zazen
 86
and i hear nothing
 87
     its hum and glare
 88
 
 
just then
 89
 
 
your bird squirts giggles
 90
down my throat
 91
and plugs my fleshy pigears
 92
with your squirming note
 93
 
 
we’re rinsed before we wash together
 94
a-sighing sea-o-two
 95
breathing in whole blanks
 96
we roll right down
 97
the window
 98
thanks
 99
 
 
squished across your smile
 100
my eyes are full of tea
 101
now sounds themselves
 102
are names i hear
 103
i know
 104
them they
 105
knew me
 106
 
 
every plant
 107
that grows is tea
 108
when you speak
 109
you sing to me
 110
 
 
was lost
 111
but now
 112
youre sound
 113
 
 
was blind
 114
but now
 115
iced tea
 116
 
 
this afternoon i know i heard
 117
dharshini david wink at me
 118

23 Apr 06

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i don't get it. but it sounds great. its funny in a good way. you keep the sound straight through the poem. never falters.
 — listen

ten
 — borntodance

when you type, I wing
 — borntodance

ah, yes.

There is the odd clumsy note here and there ... But as a whole, this sings beauty. I love it.

pitchspork -- good word, hard to read.

line 5 -- ends in mid-thought

by lilne 24, you've picked up the rhythm and run like hell.
 — alicedark

This is so intriguing. I like the breaks, it flows so nicely, ,like an overturning bucket

-madderhatter
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b ump
 — unknown

bumps are like farts, embarrassing
 — borntodance

I miss punctuation, but although my eyes hurt a little bit, the internal drive and rhyme pulled me in. I really enjoy "every plant that grows is tea," and how you carry that through to appreciating everything about the lover.
 — leukothea

Line 11 - pitch pork or pitchfork?  This is interesting but then it gets too long.  Lines 3-4 are very good lines!  

Punctuation is a kindness to the reader.
 — Isabelle5

it's not supposed to be about loving another person per se.
 — unknown

Yay!! Something to dance to.
-Nerv a
 — unknown

don't know much 'bout poesy,  but you should get your ears checked,yo, she was winkin' at me.
 — unknown

fantastic!
remove right line 48 to correct the detracting inversion, and you're gold

-k
 — unknown

thank you. i consider this one of my best and favorites.
 — unknown

love 50-62
You inspired me with this, i hope you are still around so i can say
Thanks.
 — sir_I_clan

maravilloso

so much to love here


specially liked:

so slick your cat tongue
45
up my nose
46
nuzzle my salty chin
47
feel me bite right off your lip


and


our teeth touched
81
     when you stole my air
82
          my pen
83
and so we sit
84
     still dumb and stare
85
          zazen



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thanks
F
 — unknown

can we have a name here please?

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 — fractalcore

wholly macaroni! i guessed it right!
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how did i ever miss this before?
so good to read you again, man!

hope to see you on thanksgiving or
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