|Pi'non'cchio (Object Poem)
From sad gig to worse;
travels shrouded in darkness;
then gottles of geer.
13 May 06
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"I know what this is." Close Encounters of the Third Kind.
Only I really don't (I don't like you much at the moment).
I'll have to think on this - hmmm.
no idea on this one, sorry.
The tone is disapproving, which I admire, I wish I knew what of. That's the hook, I suppose.
Is this about a musical instrument?
Check out the title.
'gottles of geer' - very funny, keep practising :0)
I really don't understand the title or the poem.
too obscure for most people to understand
Help! I wanted to understand this poem. It was so charming, but how did bottles of beer transform into gottles of geer? Catchy, quirky and downright adorable, but I must sheepishly admit to missing the point. I want to add that I think Pinocchio
is a captivating subject for an object poem (!) After all, he was a mere piece of wood until Gepetto carved him into a doll, and the doll dances away.
Delightful verse. Thank you for playing.
Thks for comments. For puzzled have posted explanashun at 'Poetry Contest Results: X-tra' forum thread. http://poetry.t etto.org/forum/post/77236/
Good poem, you have captured well the often depressing existence of a traveling entertainer and the humor in being a failing ventriloquist.
Satire finely presented..
You're very talented. All I could garble was "ottles of eer"
Ta hobs, anks a ot G. ;))
Wood wittle penises
Yes, I am afraid I would never have made sense of it without comments below, which doesn't mean that I didn't like it enough to read them. Pity you can't add an image of said object or place it in context where reference would be more accessible as I would not want to see it altered as it is so nice, tight and expressive.
hmmm, "gottles of geer".
very nice haiku...makes me