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Slow Poetry Movement
CrunchyWeta

For poetry enthusiats
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today is national slow poetry day
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so go ahead
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lentement lentement
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give some mindful mastication
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let the word sauce dribble
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as they perambulate peristaltically
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to oesophagus's underworld
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awash in your acid
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their vitality absorbed
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feel their nourishment
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sense their resonance
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their rhythm
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on your palette
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pass some on
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(to a friend)
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21 May 06

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Comments:

what a refreshing addition to PC. Line 4 sent me into reams of smiles. I really like the no punctuation; you pull it off delightfully. bravo.

Grace
 — borntodance

Hi, thanks for your kind comments. I'll pop in to visit your poems over the next few days.
Cheers
Glenn
 — CrunchyWeta

Shouldn't it be "lentamente?" Whatever, I like it nonetheless.
 — the_recluse

Dear whoever, I guess lentamente is ok if you have ,shall we say catholic tastes, however in my mind this is definitely a french job.
 — CrunchyWeta

I will try and slow down but its hard cus my head won't let me.
 — larrylark

this is a nice random to bump into.
yeah, slow is fine.
: )
 — fractalcore

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