|the freckles on your nose...
...are a real cute constellation.
When I try to write you prose
I just lose my concentration,
'cause you're a poem, head to toe--
5 foot 3 alliteration.
The freckles on your nose
are a real cute constellation.
31 May 06
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oh, wow. this seems as if were written just for me. how sweet of you.
Cute. I like it.
haha, this is really cute. :3
oh my god. cliche, but just about the absolute best cliche thing i've ever read. you get a 9.
we have a user called 5 foot 3
ooh wow, a good reception. well thank you all. i've been off PC for about a month now, so I was leery submitting a shorter new poem because my trend has been to write long series of stanzas, but it's very comforting seeing your kind comments. now i guess i'll take away that unknown name. thanks all, keep livin' the dream.
haha, and that's pretty humorous there's a user called 5 foot 3. i didn't know. i ought to go look them up right now.
this is tres cute! love the rhyme scheme
gah so sweet!
why thank you! gotta love those sentimental quickies
Just because we have heard an idea before does not make it cliche - it is not overused here!
I like it and its not cliche!
again, i find myself admiring x.
A poem I wish
had been written to me.
This is so adorable!! love it, instant favorite.
hate it in a loving way :)
i sure do appreciate it! marionette, wordsandme, and unknown!
sweet sweet sweet
such a cute idea. Love it. Don't change a thing.
i would get rid of the first line, because i think it makes a better ending than an introduction. but still, its cute : )
wouldn't that kill the rhyme?
I like it at the top and the bottom. It brings the poem full circle and such...
i like it at the end and beginning too. its more complete that way and soooo cute
Tightly written, slightly tritely but soooooooo romantic! Give it to somebody@!
I hear cute and romantic, but I just want to see someone rap this...
Is this a joke? Because I am laughing.
8.8, I am laughing, at this so called poetic community.
You're actually the punchline of every single poem here. Your presence is needed to help balance the ying.
lol, I know you're hysterical!
this is adorable<3!
It's tre cute, I love the use of the word "alliteration" but the rhyme was a tad distracting.
Pra3, since you find it your palce to laugh at the writing of others, why is it you don't post any of your own work. It's really easy to give crap when you don't have to take any isn't it?!?
I agree this is a constructive site, not for bashing poems. if you have an issue, tell the writer what you think they should change, don't just dis poems without backing it up. If thats what you want to do, find somewhere else to do it.
an amusing read, adorable
cute, if a guy wrote something llike this for me i'd be very flattered.
Not bad at all.
Aw man, you win this round. Adorable.
this is supercute, i love it!!
WHAT'S THE BIG DEAL???
this is a great example of a poem that uses rhyme well. seems like no one knows how to rhyme and make it sound natural.
it is cute, but rhyming -ation, -ation, -ation is really pretty easy
this is good.
thank you :] and oldie but goodie. i appreciate all your comments. reading them makes me want to put more stuff up, since these poems are nearly two years old--keep your eyes open!