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CARNATION REIN
gnormal

CARNATION: WHEN SOME COME SOME WENT REIN
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CARNATION: WHEN SOME COME SOME WENT REIN
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CARNATION: WHEN SOME COME SOME WENT REIN
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23 Apr 02

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Please define the poem in this poem. Thank you

M8
 — mouser8r

You oughta post a little explanation on all your poems -- I love all the ones I get, but it just takes me so so long to get some (some I still don't get). You've got more than meets the eye, gnormal.
 — unknown

These are puzzems. Explanations would goose the kilt that laid the golden gingerbread.
 — unknown

i agree. half the fun is finding what you missed. and wondering if you missed any thing at all or if you're just staring for a meaning that isn't there.
it's ok. no one can see you looking silly at home.
 — jade

Um, if you think there's meaning in this tripe, you're under-educated. This is bullcorn.
 — unknown

there is more meaning in bullcorn than tripe.
but i should be more responsible with my titling.
so i changed it.
 — gnormal

I love the pseudo-word-palindromity of this. Yeah.
 — unknown

I don't know. There's either a whole load of hidden stuff in there, or there's nothing at all.
 — Moose

This has probably got some fantastically amazing meaning all encapsulated in one incredibly brilliant line WHICH cojoined with the Title bursts forth its hidden secretes like something attentionally deficited exploding from John Hurt's stomach.

Give me something tumpty tumpty any day, and I will say
Hello poem
For that is what you are
You may be tumpty tumpty
You may not be a star
But for me you are a poem
And for that i say Hurrahr!


 — unknown

YOU KNOW. even some of the greatest bands will then suck because they only knew 3 chords. NO GROWTH.
 — unknown

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 — unknown

i don't like the thought of defining the poem because then it wouldn't be so intruging
 — pookey0922

u really need 2 be straight
-John Cena
 — unknown

I have only just figured this one out, and now it's on continuous loop...
 — thesilencing

I'm not sure what I think of this. It's a little gimmicky. But at the same time something is being put across that wouldn't come across perhaps any other way. It creates an effect, a pause, a continuum. I think I like it.
smugzy
 — unknown

beer earth
beer earth
beer earth
 — noodleman

hahaha
 — unknown

HAHAHAHAHAHA!  I missed it in it's first incarnation.
 — Isabelle5

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 — unknown

; )
 — fractalcore

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