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GRAVIA! Arivga! VIAGRA!!
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Yesterday, I was
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Rip Van Winkle.
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Today, I am
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Rip Vac Wankle
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Tomorrow, I will
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Rip Yur Nickerzov.
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17 Aug 06

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haha.  good for a laugh.
clever.
 — midare

Ta, M. :)
 — unknown

funnah!!!
 — unknown

HAHAHAHAHAHA!  I love comedic poetry!  I also love the nonsense words that are not really nonsense.  

It makes me miss Noodleman and his poem about his mother...sniff
 — Isabelle5

THks, I. I loved that poem by noodleman. It worked absolutely perfectly. My only gripe  was that I felt his title should have been done along the same lines.  Boy, did I feel a fool ! heh!
 — unknown

   arivga indeed
            ; more broken english
  tickle mi funne bonz he he.....
 — Liliana

I'm so glad to have been of service, ma'am. :)
 — unknown

well, well,well...
look what have we hear.

RIP van diesel pet roll over
duh bongo beat duh fur
fore over ah mean-it.

well-writ, witty sir.
end aye mean eat.

; )
 — fractalcore

lol

good oen
 — funes

HAHAHA LOVE IT!!!!!
 — IsabellaSwan

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