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Moai, Moai, Moai (FOTO Friday 3)

Three stone witnesses
raised in acknowledgement,
petrified and silent;
immemorial captives
raised in force and vigour
by illustrious builder.


4 Sep 06

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Fails without the visual. 'Stone witnesses' says 'petrified and silent' for you, so you can minimalize futher. A few too many descriptives in such a short work.
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