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tools for breaking up
Xiada

you handed me
 1
 
 
a hammer when--
 2
 
 
what i needed was
 3
 
 
a screw.
 4

9 Sep 06

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OMG!  That is wonderful!
 — jrwentzel

ha ha ha
 — unknown

v creative
 — sarahjoie

thanks guys. any comments/crits on the line breaks/wording? i was playing with line 3 as: "was like being handed a hammer"
 — Xiada

i'm tickled pink.
 — unknown

Spot on
 — larrylark

thanks larrylark and unknown.
 — Xiada

this made me lol. :)
 — unknown

your wit is a rare tool to find.
hold onto it.
: )
 — fractalcore

and ride...
: )
 — fractalcore

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