| A Dedication to Trochee
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Henry
| Trochee should have a moustache | 1 |
It'd compliment his face. | 2 |
Not a goatee or a chinstrap | 3 |
for they'd seem too out of place. | 4 |
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And if you try and fail | 5 |
to grow hair there, take a trip | 6 |
to have some hair transplanted | 7 |
from your scrotum to your lip. | 8 |
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To Trochee
from his good
friend
Henry |
8 Nov 06 |
Rated 4.8 (4.4) by 6 users.
Active (6): 1, 1, 1, 8, 9, 10
Inactive (8): 1, 1, 1, 1, 6, 7, 7, 10
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HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
— Isabelle5
Absolute genius. I agree a pubic mustache would compliment his face greatly.
— Borat
Hmmm... thank you buddy
although the rhyme scheme looks forced. 6/10.
LMAO
— trochee
you guys are retarded!
(but funny)...and waaaay too bored.
Thanks Henry and
Thanks Trochee (for the message board fame)
hehe
Jen
=-)
— jenakajoffer
Two ones and no comments? Someone is just being malicious now. For some reason I'm disliked.
— Henry
Two in a row even.
— Henry
This is a funny poem. That'd be a curly moustache. Wouldn't look natural probably.
— MrChris
hey, i like trochee.
but this is funny.
7/10
— miss_minx
That is kinda cruel...lol. He isn't bad looking and some women like a smooth baby face.
— MaryH
Oh, he Is Cute! How did I miss the picture?
— Isabelle5
Ok Thx ladies ... *blush**blush*
— trochee
good God this is the sort of trash made to be written in the wee late night hours when you are very alone, then stuffed into some poor, unassuming envelope and mailed to Trochee - thus us innocent bystanders need not be affected/annoyed.
— WordsAndMe
Didn't Henry post a comment on the poem "for varun." about limited audiences being a bad thing? Well Henry "globally speaking" how many people know trochee? Limited Audience 1/10.
— unknown
A lot !
— trochee
atleast the ladies!
— trochee
*laughs* You're a funny man Trochee.
Hope you liked your dedication.
— Henry
Loved it man... and i got 100 hits to my "myspace" account..
— trochee
So...you took my advice Trochee! You have a moustache! See I had a good idea.
— Henry
when Henry - the dedication specialist says ...how can i not pay heed to your advice :-)
jokes apart ... i would really like to see your pic for sure.
— trochee
uhh ok 6/10
— Jillian
this poem sucks
— unknown
ieuw..
i hope trochee doesn't decide to do that.
other than that... :)
— photobooth
This sounds kinda of mean ....this website is not meant for being mean....it is meant for being critical on poems!
— Drclocks
you can do better...way better.
The last line is too obvious, we can read the play before you've made it...thus it loses its magic...it needs more zing.
-particularly work on 5-7.
— DeformedLion
lol this was my first dedication and it wasn't supposed to be good at all. Trust me.
— Henry
It was my first by the way...the ones written before it were made dedications in hindsight.
— Henry
is that an excuse?
fix it, make it good.
— DeformedLion
So demanding!
I just might now.
— Henry
whoaaaa
this ones still making the rounds!
now i am embarassed
— trochee
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