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lazy night
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Lazy night
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with my eyes wide open
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and dust
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collecting on the surfaces of my life.
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Black night,
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no star to comfort;
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to offer their eyes
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awake with mine.
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i drift between this world and that of my future,
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that's why they call them dreams,
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that's why you're asleep
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when they all come true
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which is why the sun
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is so beautifully
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limiting.
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good night,
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lazy night.
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21 Nov 06

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yawn, so sleepy, good night :)
 — Ananke

this is nice
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