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happy lonely happy
gnormal

if i can touch people i touch people.
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if i cant i make something beautiful.
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if i have a choice i touch people.
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i grew up cant.
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then i could.
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now i have a choice.
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12 Dec 06

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CAN"T SHE?

Can-on-drums, of this
Of that and whatnot...
I'd better now choke.

Just dig me a hole
Where I'll gladly stink;
Presents, pasths, fut-yours:

Poke(d).

Cannot pay the price
If you won't let me;
Hear the crow cant, "SHE..."

*fractalcore, 11/26/2007*
   (big fan of gnormal's)
 — unknown

just revisiting.
: )
 — fractalcore

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