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Brendon came out of the lake a corpse.
 1
Now homeless, Rachel is
 2
loving wife of someone who has become
 3
fingerprints smudged by water,
 4
rigor mortis and personal effects,
 5
and no note to say why ---
 6
the streaky bacon in a packet of lucky strikes,
 7
three dollars three cents, two high-heeled shoes
 8
size 14, cocktail dress, marigolds, letter opener.
 9

5 Jan 07

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i really really liked this particularly lines 3~5, although im too thick to understand the last line,haha, i still enjoyed it.
 — wemsntdspair

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