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X POEM III
chuckles

someone went and left     an open window
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                     i'm alone as i lower
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          my expectation     a cold toilet seat
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15 Jan 07

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i think this is rather clever. well done. no criticism.
 — unknown

very nice.
: )
 — fractalcore

this works from upper left to lower right
or from upper right to lower left or
the conventional way.

works perfectly.
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 — fractalcore

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