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American Breakfast
fishykarma

Fill my cup
 1
with
 2
CRUDE OIL
 3
and my bowl
 4
with
 5
bro    dre
 6
    ken    ams.
 7
for I
 8
will make a
 9
meal
 10
of this
 11
"democracy"
 12
yet.
 13

24 Jan 07

Rated 7 (7) by 1 users.
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nice job conveying your strong message but I think (and don't get me wrong I believe poetry can be found in all) but this is mor politics than poetry in my oh so humble opinion so as a poem I rate it an 8 but personal preferance I'd say 6 so 7 it is
 — turtlepoet

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